2020版高考英語大二輪復(fù)習(xí) 專題六 寫作規(guī)范練（二）

寫作規(guī)范練(二)(限時：35分鐘)寫作(共兩節(jié)，滿分35分)第一節(jié)　短文改錯(共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分[2019·湖南長郡中學(xué)適應(yīng)性考試]It is one of most exciting experiences in my life. My relationship with the motorcycles begin when I was a child. The feelings are difficultly to explain. There is an important difference among cars and motorcycles. Cars forgive mistakes, but motorcycles don't. There are two important period in my life relating to the motorcycles: the beginning and today. My father bought we a little motorcycle. My sisters and brother already knew how to ride motorcycles. I was at five years old, and I remember perfectly the first day which my father taught me to ride it. I was not afraid but I drove all afternoon on the tennis court.答案與解析：It is one of most exciting experiences in my life. My relationship with the motorcycles when I was a child. The feelings are to explain. There is an important difference cars and motorcycles. Cars forgive mistakes, but motorcycles don't. There are two important in my life to the motorcycles: the beginning and today. My father bought a little motorcycle. My sisters and brother already knew how to ride motorcycles. I was at five years old, and I remember perfectly the first day my father taught me to ride it. I was not afraid I drove all afternoon on the tennis court.①在one of后加the　“one of the＋形容詞的最高級＋名詞復(fù)數(shù)”為固定搭配，意為“最……的……之一”，故在one of后加the。

②begin改為began　根據(jù)后面的when I was a child可知，此處敘述發(fā)生在過去的事情，應(yīng)用一般過去時，故將begin改為began③difficultly改為difficult　此處應(yīng)用形容詞作表語，表示主語的狀態(tài)或特征，故將difficultly改為difficult④among改為between　among表示三者及以上的“在……中間”；between表示在兩者之間，一般與and搭配使用此處介紹的是汽車和摩托車的區(qū)別，故將among改為between⑤period改為periods　period為可數(shù)名詞，此處前有two修飾，應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故將period改為periods⑥r(nóng)elating改為related　句中已有謂語are，且與此處無連詞連接，故應(yīng)用非謂語形式又因relate與其邏輯主語之間為被動關(guān)系，應(yīng)用過去分詞表示被動，故將relating改為related⑦we改為us　此處作動詞bought的賓語，應(yīng)用賓格形式，故將we改為us⑧刪除at　本句為主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，直接用表示年齡的短語“數(shù)詞＋year(s) old”作表語，不需要介詞，故刪除at⑨在which前加on或which改為when　此處是定語從句，從句中缺少狀語，而先行詞day表示時間。

which在從句中代指先行詞day，作介詞on的賓語，與介詞on構(gòu)成從句的狀語，或者用副詞when，故在which前加on或?qū)hich改為when⑩but改為and　本句中的“我不害怕”和“我在網(wǎng)球場騎了一下午摩托車”之間為并列關(guān)系，并非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故將but改為and第二節(jié)　書面表達(dá)(滿分25分)[2019·桂林、賀州市調(diào)研]假定你是高三學(xué)生李華，你在校園網(wǎng)上看到一則招募暑假英語夏令營志愿者的廣告，請你寫一封信申請參加內(nèi)容包括：1．自身的英語情況；2．相關(guān)經(jīng)驗注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開頭和結(jié)束語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)參考詞匯：英語夏令營English Summer CampDear Sir/Madam，My name is Li Hua and I'm a student in a high school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours truly，Li Hua參考范文：Dear Sir/Madam，My name is Li Hua and I'm a student in a high school. I'd like to apply to be a volunteer of the English Summer Camp.First of all, I'm very fond of English, and I often take an active part in all kinds of activities related to English. ①Having a good knowledge of English grammar and going to the English corner every Sunday afternoon do a lot of good to my spoken English. ②Second, I've taken part in plenty of voluntary work since Senior 1, through which I have gained much valuable experience. I find it meaningful to help people and consider it a pleasure. Last but not least, I've got a great deal of experience in organizing English activities. All in all, I'd be honored if you can choose me. I'll make every effort to do my job and you won't regret it.Yours truly，Li Hua一句多譯：①M(fèi)y spoken English is excellent due to the fact that I have a good knowledge of English grammar and go to the English corner every Sunday afternoon.②Secondly, I've taken part in plenty of voluntary work since Senior 1, which helped me gain lots of valuable experience.- 4 -。