高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí) 寫作專題講座 第九講 記敘文（一）寫人記敘文課件

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1、題目要求題目要求(2012衡水模擬衡水模擬) 你校組織了以你校組織了以“讀書、進(jìn)步讀書、進(jìn)步”為主題的為主題的“英英語讀書月語讀書月”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面信息寫一篇短文，介紹你們活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面信息寫一篇短文，介紹你們班的班的“讀書明星讀書明星”李華同學(xué)。要點(diǎn)如下：李華同學(xué)。要點(diǎn)如下：姓名：李華性別：女年齡：姓名：李華性別：女年齡：18所在班級(jí)：高三所在班級(jí)：高三6班班 特點(diǎn)：特點(diǎn)：1積極參加讀書月活動(dòng)，喜歡閱讀英文報(bào)刊雜志和原著；積極參加讀書月活動(dòng)，喜歡閱讀英文報(bào)刊雜志和原著；2有良好的讀書習(xí)慣和方法，已寫了三本讀書筆記；有良好的讀書習(xí)慣和方法，已寫了三本讀書筆記；3很好合作，樂于助人。很好

2、合作，樂于助人。獲獎(jiǎng)情況：獲獎(jiǎng)情況：1學(xué)校學(xué)?！澳M聯(lián)合國(guó)模擬聯(lián)合國(guó)(Model UN)”辯論賽一等獎(jiǎng)；辯論賽一等獎(jiǎng)；2省中學(xué)生英語演講比賽第一名。省中學(xué)生英語演講比賽第一名。感言：閱讀使人進(jìn)步，英語讓我快樂！感言：閱讀使人進(jìn)步，英語讓我快樂！參考詞匯：模擬聯(lián)合國(guó)辯論賽參考詞匯：模擬聯(lián)合國(guó)辯論賽 the debate of Model UN 原創(chuàng)的原創(chuàng)的 original 要求：要求：100字左右字左右 _技法指導(dǎo)技法指導(dǎo) 以寫人為主的記敘文，應(yīng)該注意肖像描寫、行動(dòng)描寫、以寫人為主的記敘文，應(yīng)該注意肖像描寫、行動(dòng)描寫、語言描寫、心理描寫以及對(duì)細(xì)節(jié)的描寫?？忌鷳?yīng)根據(jù)寫作語言描寫、心理描寫以及對(duì)細(xì)

3、節(jié)的描寫。考生應(yīng)根據(jù)寫作的要求，靈活掌握、突出重點(diǎn)。寫作過程中要注意以下幾的要求，靈活掌握、突出重點(diǎn)。寫作過程中要注意以下幾個(gè)方面的問題：個(gè)方面的問題： 1人物寫作通常需要介紹人物的姓名、年齡、外貌、人物寫作通常需要介紹人物的姓名、年齡、外貌、學(xué)歷、經(jīng)歷、專業(yè)、愛好、特長(zhǎng)、事跡、性格等多個(gè)方面，學(xué)歷、經(jīng)歷、專業(yè)、愛好、特長(zhǎng)、事跡、性格等多個(gè)方面，但考試時(shí)需要嚴(yán)格按照寫作要求來寫，包括所給的全部信但考試時(shí)需要嚴(yán)格按照寫作要求來寫，包括所給的全部信息點(diǎn)，既不能遺漏，也不能隨意添加。息點(diǎn)，既不能遺漏，也不能隨意添加。 2對(duì)題目所給的信息要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)重組，安排好寫作對(duì)題目所給的信息要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)重組，安排好

4、寫作順序，突出重點(diǎn)信息。重點(diǎn)信息通常是寫作的目的所在，順序，突出重點(diǎn)信息。重點(diǎn)信息通常是寫作的目的所在，比如求職要重點(diǎn)突出學(xué)歷、經(jīng)歷；新聞報(bào)道要重點(diǎn)突出事比如求職要重點(diǎn)突出學(xué)歷、經(jīng)歷；新聞報(bào)道要重點(diǎn)突出事跡；介紹自己的老師、朋友要突出他們的特點(diǎn)等。跡；介紹自己的老師、朋友要突出他們的特點(diǎn)等。 3注意運(yùn)用正確的時(shí)態(tài)。描寫人物的外貌、性格、注意運(yùn)用正確的時(shí)態(tài)。描寫人物的外貌、性格、興趣等常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；而描寫人物的出生、教育背景、興趣等常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；而描寫人物的出生、教育背景、經(jīng)歷、事跡常用一般過去時(shí)。經(jīng)歷、事跡常用一般過去時(shí)。 第一步構(gòu)建框架，清晰行文第一步構(gòu)建框架，清晰行文謀篇布局謀篇布局黃

5、金模板黃金模板 Li Hua, an _ (年齡年齡) girl from _ (地地點(diǎn)點(diǎn)), loves _ (愛好愛好) and has made 3 copies of notes, which shows her proper reading methods and good habits. She is always ready to _ (特點(diǎn)特點(diǎn)). Li Hua is expert at _ (特點(diǎn)特點(diǎn)) and she is also a _ (特點(diǎn)特點(diǎn)). In this “Reading and Progress” activity, she _ (獲什么獎(jiǎng)獲什么獎(jiǎng)) i

6、n _ (在什么活動(dòng)中在什么活動(dòng)中). “Reading can make me progress and English can make me happy！” that is what she has learnt from reading. 第二步打造亮句，增色文章第二步打造亮句，增色文章1李華，女，李華，女，18歲，高三歲，高三6班學(xué)生，喜歡閱讀英文報(bào)刊雜志班學(xué)生，喜歡閱讀英文報(bào)刊雜志和原著，并且已經(jīng)寫了三本讀書筆記。和原著，并且已經(jīng)寫了三本讀書筆記。 Li Hua, who is an 18yearold girl from Class 6, Senior 3, enjoys rea

7、ding English magazines, newspapers and even original English novels. She has made 3 copies of notes so far. Li Hua, an 18yearold girl from Class 6, Senior 3, loves reading books, such as English magazines, newspapers and even original English novels and has made 3 copies of notes. 2李華很好合作，在各種閱讀活動(dòng)中都很

8、積極踴躍。李華很好合作，在各種閱讀活動(dòng)中都很積極踴躍。 Its very easy to cooperate with Li Hua. She takes an active part in various reading activities. Li Hua is expert at communicating and she is also a cooperative girl who is very active in all kinds of reading activities. 第三步串句成文，保證流暢第三步串句成文，保證流暢 Li Hua, an 18yearold girl f

9、rom Class 6, Senior 3, loves reading books, such as English magazines, newspapers and even original English novels and has made 3 copies of notes, which shows her proper reading methods and good habits. She is always ready to help her fellow classmates improve their reading. Li Hua is expert at comm

10、unicating and she is also a cooperative girl who is very active in all kinds of reading activities. In this “Reading and Progress” activity, she won the first prize in the debate of Model UN and the first place in the Provincial Middle School Students English Speech Contest. “Reading can make me pro

11、gress and English can make me happy！” that is what she has learnt from reading. 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇介紹法國(guó)著名請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇介紹法國(guó)著名的作家和詩(shī)人莫泊桑的短文。詞數(shù)的作家和詩(shī)人莫泊桑的短文。詞數(shù)120左右。左右。姓名和國(guó)籍姓名和國(guó)籍莫泊桑莫泊桑(Guy de Maupassant), 法國(guó)法國(guó)經(jīng)歷經(jīng)歷學(xué)生時(shí)代開始寫小說，學(xué)生時(shí)代開始寫小說，30多歲成名，多歲成名，43歲因病去世歲因病去世成就成就一生共寫了六部長(zhǎng)篇小說，一生共寫了六部長(zhǎng)篇小說，300多篇中篇多篇中篇小說和短篇小說小說和短篇小

12、說代代 表表 作作短篇小說短篇小說項(xiàng)鏈項(xiàng)鏈，主要描寫中小資產(chǎn)，主要描寫中小資產(chǎn)階級(jí)的生活階級(jí)的生活參考詞匯：中篇小說參考詞匯：中篇小說novelette中小資產(chǎn)階級(jí)中小資產(chǎn)階級(jí)middle and petty bourgeoisies參考范文：參考范文： Guy de Maupassant is a famous French writer and poet, who is considered as the greatest short story writer in the French history. When he was a student, he began to write n

13、ovels and became known to the French people in his thirties. In all his life, Guy de Maupassant wrote six long novels and more than three hundred novelettes and short stories. His novels mainly reflect the social life of middle and petty bourgeoisies. He was good at writing typical details from common things and his bestknown short story The Necklace is considered to be the best in this area. He died at the age of 43 because of illness.