2020版高考英語大二輪復習 專題六 寫作規(guī)范練（七）

寫作規(guī)范練(七)(限時：35分鐘)寫作(共兩節(jié)，滿分35分)第一節(jié)短文改錯(共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。2019·深圳市第一次調研I have a dream to be a doctor. Three years ago, I am badly injured in car accident. The ambulance rushed me to the nearest hospital, that the doctors and nurses did their best to look after myself. Five days late, I was getting better. I watched the doctors to perform their duties tirelessly but offer all their patients the best treatment available. My experience in that hospital great influenced me. Since then, I have made it my life's ambition to fight against diseases and save life. I know my dream will come true if I keep work hard for it.答案與解析：I have a dream to be a doctor. Three years ago, I badly injured in car accident. The ambulance rushed me to the nearest hospital, the doctors and nurses did their best to look after . Five days , I was getting better. I watched the doctors to perform their duties tirelessly offer all their patients the best treatment available. My experience in that hospital influenced me. Since then, I have made it my life's ambition to fight against diseases and save . I know my dream will come true if I keep hard for it.am改為was根據(jù)本句中的時間狀語Three years ago可知，時態(tài)應用一般過去時，故將am改為was。在car前加a此處泛指一次車禍，且accident為可數(shù)名詞，故在car前加a。that改為where分析句子結構可知，本句為非限制性定語從句，先行詞為the nearest hospital，表示地點，關系詞在從句中作地點狀語，應用關系副詞where，故將that改為where。myself改為me此處表示醫(yī)生和護士盡最大努力照顧“我”。此處作look after的賓語，應用賓格，主語和賓語并非同一人，不能用反身代詞，故將myself改為me。late改為later句意為：五天后，我好多了。late意為“晚(的)；遲(的)”，later意為“隨后；之后”。根據(jù)句意可知，此處應用later，故將late改為later。刪除towatch sb. do sth.為固定搭配，意為“看某人做某事”。此處指作者在醫(yī)院時看到醫(yī)生們不知疲倦地履行他們的職責，故刪除to。but改為and句意為：我看到醫(yī)生們不知疲倦地履行他們的職責，并為所有病人提供可行的最佳治療(方案)。offer all their patients the best treatment available和前面的perform their duties tirelessly是并列關系，而非轉折關系，故將but故為and。great改為greatly句中的influenced是動詞，應用副詞來修飾，故此處應用greatly，表示“非常；十分；極大地”，故將great改為greatly。life改為lives句意為：從那以后，我把與疾病抗爭和拯救生命作為自己的人生理想。此處“拯救生命”并非指一個人的生命，應用復數(shù)形式，故將life改為lives。work改為workingkeep doing sth.為固定搭配，意為“繼續(xù)做某事”，故將work改為working。第二節(jié)書面表達(滿分25分)2019·成都第二次診斷假定你是李華，你班本周日將組織植樹活動，請給你班外教Jenny發(fā)一封郵件，邀請她參加。內容包括： 1.活動安排； 2.注意事項； 3.盼回復，參與意向。注意：1詞數(shù)100左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Jenny，_Yours，Li Hua參考范文：Dear Jenny， I'm very glad to invite you to participate in the tree­planting activity this Sunday, which is organized by our class. On that day, we'll gather at the school gate at 9：00 o'clock in the morning and take a bus to get to the destination: the hill three miles from our school. On arrival, we'll be divided into several groups to take part in different tasks, including carrying trees, planting trees, watering trees and so on. I believe it will be an unforgettable experience if we keep safety in mind.I would really appreciate it if you could write back to me and tell me your decision!Yours，Li Hua- 3 -