2014高考英語 書面表達(dá)一輪訓(xùn)練（8）

2014高考英語書面表達(dá)一輪訓(xùn)練（8）附參考范文(2012湖北孝感一次統(tǒng)考)請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，結(jié)合你的校園生活中的一個(gè)事例，就英語格言“Failure is the mother of success.”這一話題，用英語寫一篇短文。In fact，there aren't always bright sunshine and gentle breeze，birds' singing and flowers' fragrant in our daily life.We have so many failures and hardships that someone will be disappointed and give up the hope of success，but life is what you make it.注意：無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語；除詩歌外，文體不限；詞數(shù)為120左右。_參考范文One possible version：Success will be gained after times of failure so long as we are good at drawing lessons from failures or mistakes and stick to what we are doing.That is the message carried in the proverb “Failure is the mother of success”For example，when I began to learn English，I was slow and clumsy that I read the words wrong from time to time.My poor pronunciation made myself laughed at by my classmates.But I didn't give up and kept practising reading aloud English every day.And my teacher gave me a helping hand，getting me right whenever I made an error.In a word，as long as we don't lose heart and keep on trying，we are sure to go through failure and achieve our aims.*結(jié)束圖表式書面表達(dá)思路與技巧 圖表式書面表達(dá)是常見的一種寫作形式,現(xiàn)筆者結(jié)合下面一則實(shí)例,談?wù)勗鯓訉懞眠@類書面表達(dá)。根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容,請(qǐng)以"How to Reduce the Present City Population"為題,用英語為雜志社寫一篇短文,闡述你對(duì)這一問題的見解。建議I 具體措施:A. 晚婚 B. 一對(duì)夫婦,一個(gè)孩子        目的:減少人口自然增長(zhǎng)(人口出生率)建議II   具體措施:嚴(yán)格控制外地人進(jìn)城務(wù)工經(jīng)商  目的:減少外地人口對(duì)城市的壓力建議III  具體措施:A. 在郊區(qū),建造生活、商業(yè)、文教、衛(wèi)生、娛樂、休閑生活小區(qū)B. 在城外建造衛(wèi)星城  目的:吸引城市居民到郊區(qū)和衛(wèi)星城工作和生活注意:1)詞數(shù):100左右。2)參考詞匯:嚴(yán)格控制have a tight control, 衛(wèi)星城 satellite town一、 認(rèn)真審題,準(zhǔn)確把握提示要求。1. 審體裁。準(zhǔn)確把握體裁是寫好一篇文章關(guān)鍵的一步。體裁的形式直接決定著考生用英語表達(dá)信息的途徑和形式,并影響著書面表述語句的正確性和準(zhǔn)確性。2. 審人稱。根據(jù)體裁要求,要準(zhǔn)確把握人稱的使用。是用第一、二人稱,還是用第三人稱。3. 審時(shí)態(tài)。不同的體裁,其動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)的使用也各有不同。一般情況下,故事、日記等體裁常以一般過去時(shí)為主要?jiǎng)釉~時(shí)態(tài);書信、便條、通知等體裁常以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主要?jiǎng)釉~時(shí)態(tài)。分析以上實(shí)例,應(yīng)以第一人稱的口吻進(jìn)行描寫。從題目要求、表內(nèi)要點(diǎn)以及體裁可知,本文時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主體時(shí)態(tài)。二、 理清表內(nèi)要點(diǎn),進(jìn)行合理發(fā)揮。圖表式書面表達(dá)其主要內(nèi)容常被列在表內(nèi)?？忌紫缺仨毨砬灞韮?nèi)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),抓住主要信息進(jìn)行描寫。可先把表內(nèi)所提供的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)用英語列出,盡量使用一些較高層次的詞匯或短語以及所學(xué)過的句法結(jié)構(gòu)(如定語從句、分詞結(jié)構(gòu)等)進(jìn)行描述。例如上述實(shí)例圖表中的內(nèi)容可用英語列出以下幾個(gè)短語或句式:(1) practice a policy of "Late Marriage" and "One Couple, One Child"(2) reduce the birth rate(3) have a tight control over country people entering cities to do various physical jobs(4) lighten the pressure on the city caused by the increasing population(5) build apartment blocks with shopping centers, schools, hospitals, as well as cinemas and theaters around us or even build satellite towns in the city suburbs or the counties round the cities(6) encourage city citizens to move there to live and work三、 正確使用過渡性詞語,提高文章的連貫性。過渡性詞語的使用是語言的連貫性得以實(shí)現(xiàn)的最常用手段。在句子與句子之間,段落與段落之間恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┏猩蠁⑾碌倪^渡性詞語是非常必要的。例如上述實(shí)例,我們可在要點(diǎn)(1)前插入表示時(shí)間順序的過渡詞語 first / firstly, 在要點(diǎn)(3)前插入secondly,在要點(diǎn)(5)前插入finally。在要點(diǎn)(6)前可以插入表示終結(jié)關(guān)系的過渡短語in this way / by this means?，F(xiàn)將中學(xué)課本中應(yīng)掌握的過渡詞語總結(jié)如下:1. 表示起始關(guān)系的有: first of all, according to, so far, as far as, to begin with, in my opinion等。2. 表示時(shí)間順序的有: first, then, later, in the end, finally, at last, after that, since then, immediately, suddenly, soon等。3. 表示空間順序的有: on the right / left, on one side of, at the top / foot / end of, in the middle of, in front of, at the back of等。4. 表示并列關(guān)系的有:and, or, also, too, as well as, neither.nor, not only.but also, either.or, not.but等。5. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的有: but, yet, however, while, on the contrary 等。6. 表示因果關(guān)系的有: because, since, as, for, thanks to, thus, therefore, as a result (of), one reason is that.another reason is that.等。7. 表示條件關(guān)系的有: if, unless, as (so) long as, on condition that等。8. 表示讓步關(guān)系的有: although, though, even if, in spite of, after all, in fact, what (who, when, where, how.) ever 等。9. 表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的有:what's more, further more, besides, what's worse, to make the matter worse, also, still, on the one hand.on the other hand等。10. 表示列舉事實(shí)的過渡性詞語有:for example / instance, such as, take.for example, as follows, and so on等。11. 表示總結(jié)性的有:in short, in brief, in a word, on the whole等。12. 表示過渡性的插入語有: I think (believe, suppose, imagine, guess.), I'm afraid, you know, as is known to us all, as we all know 等。根據(jù)以上圖表式書面表達(dá)題寫作思路,上述實(shí)例可整理成文如下:How to Reduce the Present City PopulationOur modern city is crowded, and to solve the problem, three proposals are put forward. Most of the people think that we should first practice the policy of "Late marriage" and "One Couple, One Child" in order to reduce the birth rate. Secondly, the city governments must have a tight control over country people entering cities to do various physical jobs so as to lighten the pressure on the city caused by the increasing population. Finally, more and more people suggest that we should build apartment subdivisions with shopping centers, schools, hospitals, as well as cinemas and theaters around them or even build satellite towns around the cities. In this way, city citizens will be encouraged to move there to live and work. If these three proposals are well carried out, the population will be greatly reduced。*結(jié)束 20萬元會(huì)使中國(guó)令世人矚目，中國(guó)運(yùn)動(dòng)員創(chuàng)造了新的奧運(yùn)會(huì)金牌紀(jì)錄。獲金牌的運(yùn)動(dòng)員除了得到政府獎(jiǎng)金20萬元以外，還會(huì)從地方得到更多的獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)。對(duì)此，社會(huì)各界反響不一。贊成不贊成1. 運(yùn)動(dòng)員為國(guó)爭(zhēng)了光2. 運(yùn)動(dòng)員付出了許多辛苦和汗水3. 獎(jiǎng)金有利于中國(guó)體育后備力量的培養(yǎng)1 運(yùn)動(dòng)員是國(guó)家培養(yǎng)出來的，為國(guó)爭(zhēng)光理所當(dāng)然2 得到大量獎(jiǎng)金后，有些隊(duì)員不會(huì)退役3 一些企業(yè)趁機(jī)炒作，從中獲取廣告效應(yīng) 請(qǐng)你就此現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單闡述，并提出自己的一些看法或建議。(120詞左右)提示詞匯：獎(jiǎng)金bonus 參考范文China has become a shock to the world in Olympic Game 20 the Chinese government will offer each gold medal winner the bonus of 200,000, local reward not included, which has become a household talk. Some say the players have won honor for our country after taking great pains, so they deserve it. What's more, it will benefit the training of future players. Others on the opposite side believe the players get well trained and paid by the country. It will go against our wish if the players quit after getting much money. Besides, it's said that some enterprises are taking advantage of this to sell their products. I think I will admire the sportsmen who worship not moneny but the spirits of the Olympic Games.*結(jié)束作文（*） 目前，家長(zhǎng)開車接送孩子上下學(xué)已成為一個(gè)普遍現(xiàn)象，人們對(duì)此做法褒貶不一。下面是就此現(xiàn)象所做的問卷調(diào)查結(jié)果。 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列圖表提示，描述被訪者的看法，并就此現(xiàn)象發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。 注意：1詞數(shù)100左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 Nowadays it's a common phenomenon that parents drive their children to school and back home, which causes a heated discussionA survey has just been conducted about it，and the findings are as follows_One possible version： Nowadays it's a common phenomenon that parents drive their children to school andback home,which causes a heated discussionA survey has just been conducted about it,and the findings are as follows We can see that half of the supporters believe that more valuable time can be saved for students to get enough sleepAnother 30think children can rest or have meals comfortably in their own carsAbout l5consider it reasonable just for the sake of children's safetyThe rest of them think it offers more chances for parents to communicate with their children However，other people hold different opinions55of them believe that it results in more traffic jauls，especially around schools in rush hoursAnd 30think that driving kids to and from school will undoubtedly add to the parentsburdens in aspects like time，energy and expensesStill，15worry that in the long term children may be more dependent on their parents，which does no good to themIn my opinion，we can take buses to school*結(jié)束7. 假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華。你校將于6月26日接待來自于美國(guó)某中學(xué)的學(xué)生訪問團(tuán)。你受學(xué)校委托，負(fù)責(zé)安排在津的一日活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給該團(tuán)的領(lǐng)隊(duì)Smith 先生寫一封電子郵件，介紹活動(dòng)計(jì)劃并簡(jiǎn)要說明理由，最后征求對(duì)方意見。上午與我校學(xué)生座談（話題如校園生活、文化差異等）；中午與我校學(xué)生共同進(jìn)餐（午餐包括餃子、面條等）；下午與我校學(xué)生游覽海河。注意：1. 次數(shù)不少于100；2. 可是當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；3. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)。參考詞匯：海河 the Haihe River Dear Mr SmithI am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School. _【參考范文】7.Dear Mr. Smith, I am Li Hua, chairman of the student Union, from Chenguang High School .Were very glad to know youll come to our school on June 26th, and now its my pleasure to introduce our schedule to you. In the morning, youll have a talk with the students of our school. The topic includes school life, the difference between Chinese culture and American culture. Next, well have lunch together at noon and you will eat typical Chinese food, such as jiaozi, noodles. After that, together with us students, youll have a trip to the Haihe River in the afternoon. Thats the plan for your visit. If you have any other question, please let me know. Best wishes to you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua *結(jié)束- 7 -