2016屆高考英語二輪短文改錯(cuò)專項(xiàng)突破：短文改錯(cuò)集訓(xùn)(15)

【專項(xiàng)突破】 2016 高考英語 - 短文改錯(cuò)集訓(xùn)（十五）【專項(xiàng)突破】短文改錯(cuò)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有 10 處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意： 1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10 處，多者（從第11 處起）不計(jì)分。Passage 1On a snowy winter night, a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because the wet road. And all of them were trapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran out of gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help. A man who lived nearby saw that had happened. He and some villagers succeeded in open the door and helped all of them out of the bus. He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They spent two days in their home and finally help came. All of them were thankfully for their help.Passage 2A foreign student graduated with honors from a finely university in Germany. He expected tofind a good job and have a bright future. But in his disappointment,he wasnt even giving thechance for an interview! The third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how. "Wedont employ dishonest people in Germany" is the answer. What was wrong? Shortly before hearrived in Germany, he found easy to steal subway rides. But he often rode without a ticket and wascaught up three times. Now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should all keep inminds: honesty is the best policy.Passage 3One year ago,I had a special English lesson hold at the railway station. It was quite differentfromthe regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or nofixedseats.Gathering at the entrance ofthe station, we told to collectas many English words andsentences as possible here. Curious and excited, we walkedaround the stationand lookedeverywhere, search for any information in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, theclass would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translation and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease.Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go.Passage 4Dear Mandy ，Pm not doing well in my lessons at school ， especial in maths. My dad says I must try hardbecause he wants me go to university. He thinks Im lazy ， but its not true. I work really hard，often study late into the night！ Ive tried to talk to my mother， but she always said I have to workas hard like my brother does. My brother doesnt study very hard ， and he always gets excellent grades. Its not fair ！The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says rm the best student shes had for year. When I told my dad ， all he said was， “ You mustnt waste your time in art. You must focus your mind on your lessons！ ” Pm feeling quite puzzling what to do now Would you please help me out? Thanks a lot！Yours sincerely，LisaPassage 5There ans old man in our village calling Old Joe who said to be 110 years old. This can betproved though he doesn t have a birth certificate. All his personal papers were destroy during theWorld War II. I don t know if he really is so old, and it doesn t matter. He certainly looks very ocourse, he is often asked question by people who want to be told the secret of long life. Old Joealways answered them like this,“ If you arecigarofferedtte, never accept it; if you are annoyedby someone, never lose his temper; and if you are asked foolishly questions, never answer them.Passage 6Dear Jin Jing，Your problem is common one among middle school students Maybe the following advices can help you First in all, believe in yourself Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any words Your smile will show that you are friendly to him Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you You can discuss yourstudies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies Unless anyone is in trouble, youshould be ready to help him or her Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends aspossibly Yours,Lily2016 高考英語 - 短文改錯(cuò)集訓(xùn)（十五）答案Passage 1On a snowy winter night , a bus with 45passenger had an accident becausethepassengersofwet road .And all of them weretrapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran outtrappedwasof gas and it was very cold in it. 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