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高考短文改錯專項練習 1College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as Im very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship. 2I am angry about the act of dishonesty in the exams. Im not saying that Im a good student and that Ive never cheated. I once write the answer on my hand for a history test but, unluckily, caught by my teacher. Because she was one of my most favorites, there were no words to describe how sorry I felt at once. I thought cheat would help me keep my straight As. Little I know that I was hurting not only herself but also my teachers. From this lesson I know teachers want students to succeed by learning with their own and do the best they can, not by cheating. 3Friendship is very importance. Everyone needs friendship. In all our lives we cant live without friendship just as we cant live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties in the front of us. But real friendship is no easy to come by. True friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand each other but not on benefits of each other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us.By his advices we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore more friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves. 4My secret of staying young is simple: keeping your mind awake and you will stay young all over. Take an interest in world around you, and learn at least one old thing every day. Dont think that you are ever very old to go back to school. I know a man who entered medical college in 70. He got his degree with honors and became a famous doctor. Other man went to law school at 71 and is now a active lawyer. You may say that staying young is easy only for those live in the future. In fact, you can do it whether you care enough to try to keep your mind awake and active, and which is the only way to be always young. 5My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was a time when I swim like a rock. This went on till one day when I was fishing with a friend of mine at nearby pond. I slipped into one. Had my friend not come to my rescue, I would have been drowned. Ever since then, I had come to know the importance of learning to swim. I didnt attend at any training class but learned it all by myself. Strange to say, I have difficult swimming at all now. Though the way I swim look awkward (笨拙的), at least it can keep me from floating. Thinking of this, I feel quiet satisfied. 6In a summer night in Taiwan, Xiao Hong was going on her way to school happily then suddenly she felt the street was strong shaking. The trees were torn up and many buildings were leaned down to the ground. Even a car was destroyed by the fallen buildings. She was knocked down by a tree before she knew. Two doctors carried him to safety and she was settled down in a tent for treatment. After some time, she had got over. Seeing such many goods from the mainland of China and other countries, she believed all the destroyed houses would be built. 7Im glad to write to you. It is near a month since you had left our hospital. Im still worried about you. How are you get along these days? I think you may be much better now, but Id betterhave a good rest and take good care of yourselves since you are sixty-year-old man. I still remember those days which you helped me to my English. With your help, I make good progress. But to my regret, my English remains very poor through I have made good use of my time. Can you give me some advice on it? 8One day I was dining with my friend Zhou in McDonald when two young girls came in hand in hand. While enjoyed a hamburger, I found Zhou looking around at something strangely.I raised my eyes to see what was happening. The two girls are making gestures skillfully. Obviously they were deaf-mutes. I had learned some sign languages ago, so I showed various gestures with Zhou following me in low spirits. We played and laughed cheerfully as if there had no one else present. Suddenly we saw both the two girls glaring at us. Before we could explain to them, they had walked out angrily, left the food unfinished. They thought we were making joke of them. How I regretted! 9We often think insects to be harmless. This is partly true. Many an insect are harmful. Flies carry diseases. Others insects carry diseases, too. Farmers are at war with insects most the time. Hunger insects kill crops in the fields Farmers spray the field as to get rid of these insects. Does this means that all insects are harmful? No. Many are of great helpful to man. Bees make honey. With bees and other insects, many trees would have not fruit. Silkworms make silk. Some insects eat other insects that kill fruit trees. 高考短文改錯專項練習 （答案） 1College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their fewparents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find 去掉 forpart-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a studentsscholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay Inhalf of their fees because they are rich enough. 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In all our lives we cant live importantwithout friendship just as we cant live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on getwell with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties in the front of us. But real kindsfriendship is no easy to come by. True friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand not sincere understandingeach other but not on benefits of each other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us.By his advices we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore more friends we have, advice persuaded thethe better we can improve ourselves.4 4My secret of staying young is simple: keeping your mind awake and you will stay young all keepover. Take an interest in world around you, and learn at least one old thing every day. Dont the newthink that you are ever very old to go back to school. I know a man who entered medical toocollege in 70. He got his degree with honors and became a famous doctor. Other man went to at Anotherlaw school at 71 and is now a active lawyer. You may say that staying young is easy only for anthose live in the future. In fact, you can do it whether you care enough to try to keep your mind living或在live前加who ifawake and active, and which is the only way to be always young. 5My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was a time when I swim like a rock. extremely swamThis went on till one day when I was fishing with a friend of mine at nearby pond. I slipped ainto one. Had my friend not come to my rescue, I would have been drowned. Ever since then, I ithad come to know the importance of learning to swim. I didnt attend at any training class but have 去掉learned it all by myself. Strange to say, I have no difficult swimming at all now. Though the difficultyway I swim look awkward (笨拙的), at least it can keep me from floating. Thinking of this, I looks 去掉feel quiet satisfied. quite6In a summer night in Taiwan, Xiao Hong was going on her way to school happily thenOn whensuddenly she felt the street was strong shaking. The trees were torn up and many buildings were stronglyleaned down to the ground. Even a car was destroyed by the fallen buildings. She was knocked leaning fallingdown by a tree before she knew . Two doctors carried him to safety and she was settled down it herin a tent for treatment. After some time, she had got over. Seeing such many goods from the 去掉 somainland of China and other countries, she believed all the destroyed houses would be built. rebuilt 7Im glad to write to you. It is near a month since you had left our hospital. Im still worried nearlyabout you. How are you get along these days? I think you may be much better now, but Id better getting youdhave a good rest and take good care of yourselves since you are sixty-year-old man. I still yourself aremember those days which you helped me to my English. With your help, I make good when with madeprogress. But to my regret, my English remains very poor through I have made good use of my thoughtime. Can you give me some advice on it? 8One day I was dining with my friend Zhou in McDonald when two young girls came in ahand in hand. While enjoyed a hamburger, I found Zhou looking around at something strangely. enjoying strangeI raised my eyes to see what was happening. The two girls are making gestures skillfully. were Obviously they were deaf-mutes. I had learned some sign languages ago, so I showed various beforegestures with Zhou following me in low spirits. We played and laughed cheerfully as if there had high no one else present. Suddenly we saw both the two girls glaring at us. Before we could been 或去掉twoexplain to them, they had walked out angrily, left the food unfinished. They thought we were leavingmaking joke of them. How I regretted! fun 9We often think insects to be harmless. This is partly true. Many an insect are harmful. Flies harmful iscarry diseases. Others insects carry diseases, too. Farmers are at war with insects most the Other oftime. Hunger insects kill crops in the fields Farmers spray the field as to get rid of these insects. Hungry Does this means that all insects are harmful? No. Many are of great helpful to man. Bees make mean helphoney. With bees and other insects, many trees would have not fruit. Silkworms make silk. Some Without noinsects eat other insects that kill fruit trees. 高考英語短文改錯常見錯誤：用詞錯誤和篇章錯誤用詞錯誤：1. 冠詞的錯誤：a, an的誤用,注意特別名詞如anhour,anunusualday,及字母前如an“f/l/m”定冠詞the是特指。Eg. Afterahourorsowebegantofeelveryfrightened.2.名詞的錯誤：單復數(shù)，可數(shù)及不可數(shù)Information,broccoli,meat等Eg. SothatIllgetgoodmarksinallmysubject. Withoutenoughknowledgesyoucanneverlearnwell._3. 動詞的錯誤：現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和過去時態(tài)之間的互換(看通篇時態(tài))另外動詞的非謂語也是考查的一個重點（判斷主動還是被動）OnChristmasEve,JimwentwithhisfathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychooseabigone._4. 形容詞和副詞：形容詞和副詞的誤用。副詞修飾動詞的原則。形容詞修飾名詞。另外有一個特例就是系動詞+形容詞的結構要例外。常見系動詞：感官動詞：變化動詞：還有一個考點：形容詞和副詞的級也是要注意的。兩者之間比較，關鍵詞than;而最高級是三者或三者以上，一般后面有of/ in+. Eg.Heaskedangryifwehadfinishedthework._5.介詞誤用。介詞的漏用。這一塊難度較大，多背固定搭配的短語。此外像lookforwardto,beaccustomedto,get/beusedto,leadto，pay attention to, stick to, object to, devote to, be dedicated to等后面的to是介詞，如果要跟動詞一定要變成ing形式。表示時間的in, on, atat表示片刻的時間，in表示一段的時間，on總是與日子有關表示時間的since, fromsince 指從過去到現(xiàn)在的一段時間，和完成時連用，from指從時間的某一點開始表示時間的in, afterin指在一段時間之后，after表示某一具體時間點之后或用在過去時的一段時間中表示地理位置的in, on, toin表示在某范圍內(nèi)，on指與什么毗鄰，to指在某環(huán)境范圍之外表示“在上”的on, inon只表示在某物的表面上，in表示占去某物一部分表示“穿過”的through, acrossthrough表示從內(nèi)部通過，與in有關，across表示在表面上通過，與on有關表示“關于”的about, onabout指涉及到，on指專門論述between與among的區(qū)別between表示在兩者之間，among用于三者或三者以上的中間besides與except的區(qū)別besides指“除了還有再加上”，except指“除了，減去什么”，不放在句首表示“用”的in, withwith表示具體的工具，in表示材料，方式，方法，度量，單位，語言，聲音as與like的區(qū)別as意為“作為，以地位或身份”，like為“象一樣”，指情形相似in與into區(qū)別in通常表示位置（靜態(tài)），into表示動向，不表示目的地或位置6.代詞的錯誤：常見誤用或漏用。如him-her/it-them/its-ours等 人稱代詞主格： 人稱代詞賓格： 形容詞物主代詞： 名詞性物主代詞： 反身代詞：篇章錯誤一般來說，如果短文的內(nèi)容不理解是很難改出這些錯誤。比如關聯(lián)詞和關系代詞/關系副詞等。1.關聯(lián)詞：常見的有but/however,and,so和or之間的誤用。Eg.Wetriedtofixitandtherewasnothingwecoulddo.2.一致關系：包括兩個連接成分的一致，人稱和數(shù)的一致，或者是前面提到的語法一致現(xiàn)象。一般上述的關聯(lián)詞前后比較容易出錯。 Eg.Wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories._3.關系代詞或副詞：比如只用that的特殊情況（詳見下），when,where,why,who和whom,which+介詞等Eg. IliveinBeijing，whereisthecapitalofChina._只用that的情況如下：（1）當先行詞是all,something,nothing等不定代詞時（2）先行詞的前面有first,last,only,few,much,some,any,no等詞修飾時（3）先行詞的前面有最高級修飾時（4）先行詞包含人和物時做題的思路1.先通讀全文了解短文內(nèi)容。這樣做篇章錯誤的類型就有把握，到底要轉(zhuǎn)折還是要用并列。2.逐句先把明顯的錯誤改出來。3.利用我們常出錯的一般規(guī)律來查找隱形錯誤。在改錯中宗會有一、二處一下看不出來，這種情況下，我們要利用大致會出錯的地方來分析。一般來說，改錯的地方相對均勻，不會同一種錯誤出現(xiàn)很多出，介詞或動詞偶爾例外。4.改錯題可以一發(fā)下試卷就做，因為此時頭腦較為清醒；如果做完閱讀去做的話，有可能頭腦較糊涂，不利于改錯。當然這也是因人而異，沒有絕對的例題如下：第三部分：寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分40分）2011年浙江高考英語試題第一節(jié)：短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11除起）不計分。Iwasplayingatmycousinhouse.Sincehisfamilywasrichthanmine,hehadmoretoysthanIdid.TherewasoneonparticularIdalwayswanted.Iputintomypocketwhenhewasntlooking.Iguessed,evenatthatage,Iwouldneverbeabletoenjoytoplayingwiththetoyorfacedmycousinagain;IwouldalwaysknowIddonesomethingwrong.Lateon,myauntdrovemehome.Whenshedroppedmeoff,Ipulledoutthetoyslowandgaveitback.Sheknowswhathadhappened,butshethankedmeandevermentioneditagain.