人教新課標(biāo)高中英語(yǔ)必修5 Unit 5 First aid P6 Writing 課件

必 修 5 Unit 5 【寫(xiě)作任務(wù)與要求】 掌握急救知識(shí)在日常生活中非常重要，正確的急救可以挽救傷者的生命。假如你是Lily，你的筆友Jack知道你有一定的急救知識(shí)，想讓你向他介紹一些有用的急救知識(shí)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息給他回復(fù)一封郵件。GUIDED WRITING 1. 在日常生活中了解一些急救知識(shí)非常重要。發(fā)生意外時(shí)，在醫(yī)護(hù)人員到來(lái)前，傷者需要醫(yī)學(xué)護(hù)理。2. 在實(shí)施急救時(shí)應(yīng)注意的一些問(wèn)題： 如果一個(gè)人停止了呼吸，打開(kāi)他或她的嘴，看看口腔后端有沒(méi)有食物，如果沒(méi)有食物或其它東西，利用人工呼吸的方法盡力使他或她恢復(fù)呼吸 如果一個(gè)人流很多血，要立即用干凈的布或手帕壓在傷口上止血3. 實(shí)施急救后，及時(shí)送傷者去醫(yī)院做進(jìn)一步的檢查。只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫。 【寫(xiě)作分析與指導(dǎo)】一、寫(xiě)作分析1. 寫(xiě)作思路：本篇習(xí)作主要內(nèi)容是介紹如何在日常生活中進(jìn)行急救。對(duì)于本篇習(xí)作，我們可以按如下思路進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作：(1) 審查要點(diǎn)：要先明確習(xí)作中有幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)；(2) 確定詞語(yǔ)：根據(jù)所給的提示，找出寫(xiě)作中可能用到的詞語(yǔ)，包括單詞和短語(yǔ)； (3) 組詞成句：根據(jù)所給提示及寫(xiě)作需要，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木涫桨言~語(yǔ)擴(kuò)展成句子；(4) 連句成文：根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要，恰當(dāng)排列句子的順序，使文章有一定的邏輯性，此時(shí)，我們要注意單詞拼寫(xiě)、主謂一致、人稱(chēng)一致、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題。2. 時(shí)態(tài)與人稱(chēng)：這是一篇介紹急救知識(shí)的說(shuō)明文，因此時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱(chēng)以第二或第三人稱(chēng)為主。 二、詞句儲(chǔ)備1. 寫(xiě)作中可能使用的詞語(yǔ)：(1) 了解 _ (2) 醫(yī)學(xué)護(hù)理 _ (3) 記住 _ (4) 口腔后端 _ (5) 人工呼吸法 _ (6) 嚴(yán)重出血 _ (7) 進(jìn)一步檢查 _ know about/learn about medical care keep in mind at the back of the mouthmouth-to-mouth waybleed badlyfurther examination 2. 寫(xiě)作中可能要使用的句子：(1) 在日常生活中了解一些急救知識(shí)非常重 要。 _ _(2) 發(fā)生意外時(shí)，在醫(yī)護(hù)人員到來(lái)前，傷者需 要醫(yī)學(xué)護(hù)理。 _ _ _It is of great importance to learn about some knowledge of first aid in daily life.A person who has an accident needs medical care before doctors and nurses arrive. (3) 如果一個(gè)人停止了呼吸，打開(kāi)他或她的 嘴，看看口腔后端有沒(méi)有食物。 _ _ _(4) 如果沒(méi)有食物或其它東西，利用人工呼 吸的方法盡力使他或她恢復(fù)呼吸。 _ _ _If a person is not breathing, open his or her mouth to see if there is food at the back of his or her mouth.If there is no food or other things, do your best to start his or her breathing at once, using mouth-to-mouth way. (5) 如果一個(gè)人流很多血，要立即用干凈的 布或手帕壓在傷口上止血。 _ _ _ _If a person is bleeding badly, stop the bleeding immediately by pressing a clean handkerchief or a piece of clean cloth on the wound. 三、下筆成文Dear Jack, Thank you for your letter. You told me that you want to get some knowledge about first aid. Let me tell you what I know. It is of great importance to learn about some knowledge of first aid in our daily life, for a person who has an accident needs medical care before doctors and nurses arrive. When giving first aid, you should keep these things in mind. First, if a person is not breathing, open his or her mouth to make sure there is no food or other things at the back of his or her mouth and then do your best to start his or her breathing at once, using mouth-to-mouth way. Second, if a person is bleeding badly, stop the bleeding immediately by pressing a clean handkerchief or a piece of clean cloth on the wound. After receiving first aid, the victim should be taken to a hospital to get further examination in time. I hope it is what you want to know. Yours, Lily 【點(diǎn)評(píng)】 本篇習(xí)作要點(diǎn)全，語(yǔ)言通順；同時(shí)，文章中運(yùn)用了多種句式，如定語(yǔ)從句who has an accident和V-ing結(jié)構(gòu)using mouth-to-mouth way等，提升了文章的檔次。