2019中考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí) 寫作 關(guān)于My friends.doc

關(guān)于My friends 1.寫作步驟：定基調(diào)—列提綱、寫句子—巧銜接—添佳句—成篇章 2.寫作任務(wù): 為了提高英語寫作能力，你和你的美國筆友Jack約定你每周就一個話題寫一篇短文發(fā)給他，他對你的作文進行點評指導(dǎo)。假如這次的話題是“My friends”，請你寫一篇英語短文介紹你的兩位朋友(一位與你相似，一位不同于你)，然后發(fā)給Jack。 思路點撥 1.定基調(diào) 體裁：描述與朋友之間的異同，屬于描寫性質(zhì)的文體。 時態(tài)：描述人物現(xiàn)在的情況，用一般現(xiàn)在時。 人稱：描述他人時，用第三人稱。 2.列提綱、寫句子 列提綱 寫句子 引出話題 I have lots of good friends. Although we don’t see each other often, we know each other very well. Here are two of my best friends Jenny and Linda. 介紹朋友 和你相似的朋友 (1) Jenny ______________(和我相似) in some ways. (2) We both ______________(長著小眼睛，戴眼鏡). (3) We are both ______________(個子高，有點胖). (4) We are both ______________(外向的). (5) Both of us enjoy ______________(一起讀書). 和你不同的朋友 (6) Linda ______________(和我不同). (7) She ______________(長著烏黑的大眼睛). (8) She ______________(比我矮、瘦). (9) She ______________(比我安靜). (10) At school, we are both hard-working, but she ______________(更加努力), so she always ______________(取得比我更好的成績). 表達(dá)觀點 I don’t care if friends are the same as me or different (11)______________(只要他們好). 3.巧銜接 (1)寫我和朋友相同點時可用and和also羅列；還可運用詞匯的重復(fù)使前后句銜接自然，語意連貫，如similar to, we both, we are both, both of us等。 (2)從寫和我相似的朋友轉(zhuǎn)到寫和我不同的朋友時，以及在寫某一點Linda與我不同時，可用but作為對比和轉(zhuǎn)折的連接紐帶；此外，還可重復(fù)使用含有than的比較級的句子來描述與朋友之間的不同，句式的重復(fù)也可使文章更銜接。 4.添佳句 Good friends are like stars. You don’t always see them, but you know they are there. 摯友猶如天上的星星。你不時常看見，但是你知道他們在那兒。 5.成篇章 I have lots of good friends. Although we don’t see each other often, we know each other very well. Here are two of my best friends Jenny and Linda. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 參考答案 2.列提綱、寫句子 (1) is similar to me (2) have small eyes and wear glasses (3) tall and a little bit heavy (4) outgoing (5) reading together (6) is different from me (7) has big black eyes (8) is shorter and thinner than me (9) is quieter than me (10) is more hard-working; gets better grades than me (11) as long as they’re good 5.成篇章 I have lots of good friends. Although we don’t see each other often, we know each other very well. Here are two of my best friends Jenny and Linda. Jenny issimilar tome in some ways.We bothhave small eyes and wear glasses.We are bothtall and a little bit heavy,and we are bothoutgoing.Also, both of usenjoy reading together. ButLinda is different from me! She has big black eyes. She is shorter and thinnerthanme. Linda is quieterthanme. At school, we are both hard-working, but she is more hard-working, so she always gets better gradesthan me. I don’t care if friends are the same as me or different as long as they’re good. I think good friends are like stars. You don’t always see them, but you know they are there.