2011高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí) 題型突破 書面表達(dá)4

書面表達(dá)突破(四) ——調(diào)查報(bào)告 原題再現(xiàn) 最近我校對高一學(xué)生入學(xué)一個(gè)多月來的學(xué)習(xí)生活適應(yīng)情況做了一個(gè)調(diào)查,情況如下。請你用英語表達(dá)下表的調(diào)查內(nèi)容,并提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。 60%左右的學(xué)生認(rèn)為 40%左右的學(xué)生認(rèn)為 我的觀點(diǎn) 1.高中學(xué)習(xí)很有壓力； 2.科目難度大,課后作業(yè)多； 3.沒有時(shí)間參加鍛煉等活動。 1.適應(yīng)并喜歡高中生活； 2.課程更有趣,活動更豐富,受益匪淺。 …… 要求：1.詞數(shù)150左右；2.文章開頭已給出,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯：course課程；benefit對……有益；stressful有壓力的 寫作模板 學(xué)生習(xí)作 Recently,asurveyhasbeencarriedoutinourschoolwhetherthefreshmenhasadaptedtothelifeinseniorhighschool. Ascanbeseenfromtheresultofthesurvey, opinionsaredivided.About持有第一種觀點(diǎn)的人數(shù).Thereasonsareasfollows.Firstly,第一種原因.Besides,第二種原因． Onthecontrary, otherssay他們的觀點(diǎn).Theysaythat持有這種觀點(diǎn)的原因． AsfarasI’mconcerned, weshould自己的想法.Onlyinthisway美好前景預(yù)測． Recently,asurveyhasbeencarriedoutinourschoolwhetherthefreshmenhasadaptedtothelifeinseniorhighschool. Ascanbeseenfromtheresultofthesurvey, opinionsaredivided.About60%ofthestudentsholdtheopinionthatlifeinseniorhighschoolisfarfromrelaxing.Thereasonsareasfollows.Firstly, thesubjectstheyarelearningnowareobviouslymoredifficult.Besides, theyhavetodoendlesshomeworkafterclass, whichleavesthemlittletimeforexerciseandotheractivities. Onthecontrary, otherssaytheyhaveadaptedtothenewlifeandhavebeguntoenjoyit.Theysaythattheyfindthecoursesaremoreinterestingandtheactivitiesaremorecolorful, whichsurelybenefitthemalot. AsfarasI’mconcerned, weshouldbalanceourstudyandotheractivitiesanddoeverythingefficiently.Onlyinthiswaycanwelearnmoreandenjoyourlifebetter. 名師點(diǎn)評 本文同樣以三段論的形式進(jìn)行寫作的,文中用了簡單句、并列句、同位語從句、定語從句、倒裝句,句式豐富多樣,結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜,恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用了較多高級句式,足顯作者寫作功底深厚；段與段之間巧妙運(yùn)用了銜接語onthecontrary,asfarasI’mconcerned使過渡自然,整篇文章渾然一體；另外,文章中還運(yùn)用了一些較高級詞匯,如farfromrelaxing,balance等。所以該篇文章應(yīng)屬于一篇檔次較高的優(yōu)秀作文。 仿寫訓(xùn)練 今年寒假期間你就返鄉(xiāng)農(nóng)民工問題進(jìn)行了一次社會調(diào)查。調(diào)查中發(fā)現(xiàn)因受國際金融危機(jī)的影響,農(nóng)民工原來打工的工廠倒閉,致使25%的農(nóng)民工失業(yè)。針對農(nóng)民工的就業(yè)問題,政府采取了一系列的措施,如舉辦各種勞動力招聘會,鼓勵(lì)返鄉(xiāng)農(nóng)民工自己創(chuàng)業(yè),為年輕農(nóng)民工提供免費(fèi)技能培訓(xùn)等。請根據(jù)你的調(diào)查寫一份調(diào)查報(bào)告,并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā? 注意：1.詞數(shù)150左右； 2.文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯：economicslowdown經(jīng)濟(jì)危機(jī)；jobfair招聘會 Duringthewintervacation,Iconductedasurveyaboutthereturnedoff­farmworkers.75%ofthesurveyedoff­farmworkerssaidtheywouldreturntotheoriginalworkasscheduled,but____________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】 Duringthewintervacation,Iconductedasurveyaboutthereturnedoff­farmworkers.75%ofthesurveyedoff­farmworkerssaidtheywouldreturntotheoriginalworkasscheduled,but25%ofthemlosttheirjobsbecausetheirfactorieshadbeencloseddownowingtotheglobaleconomicslowdown.Buttheywerenotalonestrugglingtosurvivetheeconomiccrisis.Duringmyinvestigation,Ifoundthatthelocalgovernmenthaddonewhattheycouldtohelptheoff­farmworkerstobeemployed.Allkindsofjobfairswereheldtohelpthemtofindjobsinthehometown.Somefarmerswereencouragedtoengageintheagriculturaldevelopment.Somewerehelpedtosetuptheirownbusinesswiththeloanprovidedbythestate.Youngpeoplewereofferedachancetobetrainedfreeandlearnapracticalskill.Ithinkthestatehasattachedgreatimportancetothelifeofthefarmers,butwestillfacealotofchallengesandmuchremainstobedone.However,withthegovernment’shelpandoff­farmworkers’hardworkingIbelievetheycansurvivetheglobaleconomicslowdownandliveabetterlife. 補(bǔ)償練習(xí)1——閱讀理解 Workersmayfeelcomfortablehandinginasicknoteforfluorphysicalillness,butnearlyhalfofworkersreportednotbeinghappytodiscloseamentalhealthconditionatwork,especiallyamongmanual(體力的)andskilledprofessions. Thesurveyof1,000workersbynationalcharitytheShawTrustfoundthat18.3%wouldnotrevealaconditioneventotheirHRdepartmentandonly17.9%woulddisclosedetailsofanillnesstoacolleague.Oftherespondents34.5%saidthereasontheywouldnotdiscloseamentalhealthconditionwasthattheyfeltworriedorashamedtheywouldbetreateddifferently.Thisfigureroseto43.3%among16to24­year­olds.Besides,oneintenworkersthoughtthatdisclosingaconditionwouldreducetheirchancesofpromotion. TimCooper,managingdirectoroftheShawTrust,said,“TheOfficeofNationalStatisticsestimatesthatoneinsixpeoplemaysufferfromamentalillhealthconditionatonetime.Despitethis,ourresearchshowspeoplearestillunwillingtodisclosesuchacondition,particularlyinthecurrenteconomicclimateinwhichworkersareconcernedaboutshowinganysignofweakness.Weknow,however,fromourworkpeoplewithmentalhealthconditionsareperfectlycapableofmanagingajobandtheirconditionswiththerightsupportfromtheiremployersandthereforefeelitisimportantthatsuchmisunderstandingis laidtorest.” Tosolvetheproblem,businessesneedtocreateanenvironmentinwhichpeoplenotonlyfeelconfidentenoughtodiscussamentalhealthconditionwithalinemanagerormembersoftheHRteambutcanalsoreceivethesupporttheyneedtocontinuemakingavaluablecontribution.Additionally,tohelpbusinessesachievethis,theShawTrusthascreatedawebsiteofferingadviceandinformation. 1．What’sthemaintopicdiscussedinthepassage? A．Workerstendtokeepsilentonmentalhealthconditions. B．Alargenumberofpeoplesufferfrommentalhealthproblems. C．Workerspaymoreattentiontophysicalhealththanmentalhealth. D．Workersdisclosetheirmentalhealthconditionsindifferentways. 答案A 解析綜合概括題。這篇文章討論的問題是員工們對自己的精神健康狀況保持沉默。 2．Workersaren’twillingtodisclosetheirmentalhealthconditionsmainlybecause________. A．theythinkit’stheirentireprivacy B．theywillbedismissedifdoingso C．theyareafraiditwillinfluencetheirwork D．theywillhavenoopportunitytogetpromoted 答案C 解析細(xì)節(jié)理解題。從第二段的內(nèi)容可得出他們不愿透露自己健康狀況的主要原因是C 項(xiàng)。 3．Theunderlinedphrase“l(fā)aidtorest”inthethirdparagraphroughlymeans________. A．strengthenedB．understood C．neglectedD．removed 答案D 解析詞義猜測題。根據(jù)上文misunderstanding,可知laytorest是消除誤解的意思,所 以是remove(去除)。其他三個(gè)詞都不符合。 4．WecanlearnfromwhatTimCoopersaidthat________. A．peopledisclosingmentalhealthconditionscandoworkperfectly B．employers’supportcontributestoworkers’performances C．thecurrenteconomyisdevelopingwell D．workersshouldaskdoctorsforprofessionaladvice 答案B 解析推理判斷題。從TimCooper的說話內(nèi)容可以推斷出選B項(xiàng)。 補(bǔ)償練習(xí)2——書面表達(dá) (2009·南通二次調(diào)研) 90后的學(xué)生,思想特殊、行為方式和價(jià)值觀令人擔(dān)憂。請你根據(jù)下表中所提供信息以“Dotrustus—agenerationborninthe90s”為主題寫一篇英語演講稿,以消除人們的憂慮。 90后的境遇 面臨更多的升學(xué)和就業(yè)煩惱,所處環(huán)境競爭更加激烈。 人們的憂慮 1.注重自我,輕視合作…… 2.缺乏毅力,容易氣餒…… 3.盲目追求,渴望成名…… 我們的長處 敢于挑戰(zhàn)…… Goodafternoon,everyone! Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“Dotrustus—agenerationborninthe90s”． ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Thankyouforyourlistening! 參考范文 Goodafternoon,everyone! Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“Dotrustus—agenerationborninthe90s”． Livinginanenvironmentfulloffiercercompetition,we,agenerationborninthe90s,arefacedwithmoreproblemsinenteringhigherschoolsandgettingemployed.Underthesecircumstances, wearedevelopingourspecialmannersandvalues,whichhasraisedpeople’sconcern. Theyworrywecaretoomuchaboutourselvesandareunwillingtocooperatewithothers,whichmakesithardforustoachievesuccessinwhateverwedo.Besides,theyconsiderusaslackingindetermination,andthisiswhatittakestodoanyjobwell.Withoutit,wemayeasilygiveupintimeofdifficulty.Theyarealsoconcernedthatwearesoeagertowininstantfamethatwefollowfashionblindly,whichwillinturnruinourvaluesandfuture. However,we,agenerationborninthe90s,haveourownadvantagesdespitesomeweaknesses.Firstly,wehavethecouragetomeetchallengesandtakerisks,whichhelpsrealizeourdreams.Inaddition,wearequick­mindedandcreative.Wecandoourworkmoreefficiently.Yet,westillneedtolearnmorefromthoseexperienced.Pleasedotrustus! Thankyouforyourlistening！ 內(nèi)容總結(jié) （1）書面表達(dá)突破(四) ——調(diào)查報(bào)告 仿寫訓(xùn)練 今年寒假期間你就返鄉(xiāng)農(nóng)民工問題進(jìn)行了一次社會調(diào)查