高考英語真題 短文改錯

專題二十一短文改錯1.【2015·陜西】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線（），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞； 2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!【答案】76.去掉in77.anything 改為something78.better改成best79.decide改成decided80.step 改為steps81.well改成good82.after改成when/while83.a改為the84.just后加to85.enjoy改為enjoying 【考點(diǎn)定位】考查短文改錯【名師點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文改錯是記敘文，短文的內(nèi)容和學(xué)生的日常生活有關(guān)。錯誤之處的設(shè)置都是平常學(xué)生容易錯的地方。考查點(diǎn)比較全面，各種詞性都考查到了，也涉及到一些語法知識的考查，如：非謂語動詞，時態(tài)等。2.【2015·四川】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1.5分，共15分）下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞；刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每句不超過兩個錯誤；2. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一次；3. 3.只允許修改10出，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of theproblems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch andafter school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdaysnow and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a timewasting activity! In fact ,I dont like to go anymore, so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace【答案】61.加上to62. tell-told63. friend-friends64.sing-singing65. many-much66.so-but67. How-What68. are-were69. him-them70. 去掉with【解析】試題分析：文章主要通過一封求助信，寫出了寫信人的困擾。作者交了三個新朋友，經(jīng)常一起去卡拉OK唱歌，但其實(shí)作者并不喜歡這樣，他想知道自己該怎么做才不會失去這段友誼。61.加上to 考查動詞want的用法，want用不定式擔(dān)當(dāng)狀語，故加上to。句意為：我真地很想和你分享一下我經(jīng)歷的問題。62. telltold 考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)時間狀語last time可知，此句需要用一般過去時，故把tell改成told。句意為正如我上次告訴你的那樣。63. friendfriends 考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)。名詞friend為可數(shù)名詞，其前有three修飾，需要用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把friend改成friends。句意為：我在這兒交了三個新朋友。64.singsinging 考查動名詞擔(dān)當(dāng)賓語。本句考查句型spend（in）doing sth結(jié)構(gòu)，故把sing改成singing。65. manymuch 考查代詞。根據(jù)句意，指的是花費(fèi)很多錢，故用much而非many。句意為：那真的花費(fèi)很多。66.so-but考查連詞。上一分句意為：我不想再去；下一分句意為：我怕失去他們的友誼，兩個分句之間有轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故把so改成but。67. HowWhat 考查疑問詞的選擇。本句中do之后缺少賓語，表示事情，故用what而非how。注意首字母要大寫。68. arewere 考查虛擬語氣。根據(jù)句子可知，此處為虛擬語氣，與現(xiàn)在事實(shí)不相符，故把a(bǔ)re改成were。句意為：如果你是我,。69. himthem 考查代詞。根據(jù)上文可知，作者交了三個朋友，故用them而非him。句意為：你會和他們說嗎？70. 去掉with 考查動詞。動詞help為及物動詞，其后接賓語時無需加介詞，故去掉with。句意為：請幫幫我，給我一些建議?！究键c(diǎn)定位】考查短文糾錯【名師點(diǎn)睛】本篇文章考查學(xué)生的短文糾錯能力。短文糾錯能力考查的范圍較廣，如各類詞類用法和各種語法知識。本篇文章中既考查了詞類用法如：61、63、65、66、69、70題，也考查了學(xué)生的語法知識如：62、64、67、68，涉及多種語法知識。要求考生要通讀全文，把握大意，還要逐讀各句才能找出錯誤所在。3.【2015·浙江】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spentweekend with you. Luckily theI was completely free then, so Ill to say “yes”. Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p.m. amin Friday evening.OnMy old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.【答案】side-sidesfrom-tosit-sittingeasy-easilyis-wasthem-itnot 刪除in hurry- in a hurryfelt-feelIf-Although/Though【解析】試題分析：這是一篇介紹教室的文章。side-sides 考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)。根據(jù)前面的three，此處應(yīng)該使用復(fù)數(shù)形式from-to考查介詞搭配 make of與make from兩者都常用在被動語態(tài)中,表示“某物由.構(gòu)成的”. make of 的原材料是看的到的,即平常我們說的物理現(xiàn)象,比如The chair is made of wood.椅子是有木頭做成的。而make from的原材料是看不到的,比如Paper is made from the trees. 紙張是由木材做成的.是一種化學(xué)變化,從紙上是看不出一棵樹滴.sit-sitting考查動名詞 動詞enjoy后接 ing形式。 easy-easily考查副詞 此處的副詞修飾動詞seeis-was考查動詞的謂語時態(tài) 根據(jù)前后句的謂語時態(tài)都是使用過去的，所以這里面也需要用過去時態(tài)。them-it考查代詞 此處的it指代的是學(xué)校。刪除not 考查意思是否表否定 該句的意思應(yīng)該是表達(dá)肯定而不是否定所以要刪除notin hurry- in a hurry考查冠詞 in a hurry 意為“立刻”，也是一個固定搭配felt-feel 考查使役動詞的法。 Make sb do sth,是使役動詞的用法。If-Although/Though考查連詞的用法 ，根據(jù)句意“盡管在我讀書的時候我是一個小孩，但我不會忘記它”表達(dá)讓步，而不是條件。而且翻譯為如果意思上也不通?！究键c(diǎn)定位】短文改錯【名師點(diǎn)睛】這種題目對語法的要求很高，要求注意上下文的，以及單詞的用法，以及特殊用法、固定搭配等。其實(shí)這一些錯誤很有可能是在寫作中會出現(xiàn)，所以，加強(qiáng)寫作的練習(xí)對于這一種題目，也是有幫助的。另外，這種題目也可以改編一下，成為語法填空的題目。4.【2015·新課標(biāo)全國II】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。     增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞作斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；              2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.【答案】71. parent改為parents72. on改為in73. very去掉74. looks改為looking75. where改為that 或者去掉 where76. begun改為began77. telling改為told78. a改為the79. saw后加his80. terrible改為terribly【考點(diǎn)定位】語法填空?！久麕燑c(diǎn)睛】通過短短的100多個詞，使考生能正確運(yùn)用各類詞和固定搭配，如動詞、名詞、副詞、代詞和連詞，辨別并改正錯誤?？偟恼f來，本題都是學(xué)生平時書面表達(dá)中常見的錯誤。多讀多練習(xí)就能找出問題所在，也能對寫作有幫助。5.【2015·新課標(biāo)全國I】第1節(jié) 短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之問交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( )劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,well live to regret it .【答案】76. think thought 77. countryside前加the78. orand79. onwith 80. been去掉81. seriouslyserious82. airsair 83. muchmany 84. foundfind85. yourour【解析】試題分析：作者是孩子的時候，夢想生活在城市。二作者現(xiàn)在生活在城市，卻向往著家鄉(xiāng)，因為那里更少的污染。76. think thought句意：我認(rèn)為生活在那兒很快樂。時態(tài)用法錯誤。這里用一般過去時，表示“過去認(rèn)為”77. countryside前加the 句意：但是我想念農(nóng)村的家鄉(xiāng)。這里countryside是特指，故用定冠詞the。78. orand句意：那里山綠并且空氣新鮮。連詞用法錯誤。前后句為并列關(guān)系，故用連詞and。79. onwith句意：隨著工業(yè)化的發(fā)展。短語搭配錯誤。短語with the development of隨著的發(fā)展。80. been去掉句意：許多研究表明。語態(tài)用法錯誤。主語與動詞為主動關(guān)系，這里不需要用被動語態(tài)。81. seriouslyserious句意：全球變暖已經(jīng)成為嚴(yán)重的問題。詞性用法錯誤。修飾名詞，前面用形容詞修飾。82. airsair 句意：我們呼吸的空氣變得越來越臟。名詞用法錯誤。名詞air為不可數(shù)名詞。83. muchmany句意：許多罕見的動物已經(jīng)消失。名詞animal為可數(shù)名詞，故用many修飾。84. foundfind句意：我們必須找到方法來保護(hù)我們的地球。動詞用法錯誤。情態(tài)動詞must后接動詞原形。85. yourour句意：我們必須找到方法來保護(hù)我們的地球。代詞用法錯誤。這里應(yīng)當(dāng)是保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境。【考點(diǎn)定位】短文改錯?！久麕燑c(diǎn)睛】改錯題整體難度適中，文章簡單易懂?？键c(diǎn)分布均勻，添、刪、改比例為1:1:8。重點(diǎn)考查時態(tài)、名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)、冠詞、連詞、副詞以及介詞的搭配等?？忌獯祟愵}型時一般應(yīng)遵循保持句子原意的原則，即不能改變文章或作者所表達(dá)的意思，包括其語氣和上下文的邏輯關(guān)系。只對短文中的用詞錯誤、語法錯誤、行文關(guān)系錯誤進(jìn)行改正，且要小改而不大改。內(nèi)容總結(jié)（1）專題二十一短文改錯1.【2015·陜西】短文改錯（共10小題（2）84. foundfind句意：我們必須找到方法來保護(hù)我們的地球（3）85. yourour句意：我們必須找到方法來保護(hù)我們的地球（4）【名師點(diǎn)睛】改錯題整體難度適中，文章簡單易懂