原八年級英語下冊 Unit 3 Could you please clean your room（第6課時）Section B(3a3b)同步作文指導(dǎo)課件 （新版）人教新目標(biāo)版

Unit 3Could you please clean your room?第六課時Section B (3a3b)單元同步作文指導(dǎo)本單元以“家務(wù)和許可”為話題，圍繞家庭中的日常事務(wù)展開，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)并掌握情態(tài)動詞could表示委婉地請求許可的用法。結(jié)合本單元短文所講內(nèi)容“青少年在家應(yīng)不應(yīng)該做家務(wù)”，具體到書面表達中，要求同學(xué)們會寫有關(guān)議論的短文，即議論文。議論文有三要素：論點、論據(jù)和論證。中學(xué)階段英語議論文結(jié)構(gòu)相對固定簡單，通常為：1在導(dǎo)語部分開門見山，直接提出要討論的問題；2在正文部分對所提問題進行事例論證；3在結(jié)尾部分進行總結(jié)、歸納，并提出自己的觀點。寫議論文時常用的相關(guān)短語和句型：引出議論的相關(guān)表達方式：These years，some students are interested in.近年來一些學(xué)生迷上了Some parents think.一些家長認為The students of our class have different ideas about.我們班的學(xué)生在方面有不同的觀點。用關(guān)聯(lián)詞和相關(guān)句型列舉事實依據(jù)，采用正反對比或歸納推理的方法，證明所持觀點的正確性或表明所持的態(tài)度。I like.but I hate.我喜歡但是討厭For example，.例如，F(xiàn)irst，.Second，.Third，.首先，第二，第三，用總結(jié)性語句來強調(diào)和重申提出的觀點。In a word，.總之，In my opinion，.在我看來，As we know，.正如我們所知，Whats more，.更重要的是，Do you like doing housework？I like doing housework.I will help my mother do housework when I am free.Because I think parents are very tired after a days work.I want them to have a good rest.I often help clean room，wash dishes，take away the rubbish and so on.Last Sunday，my mother was on duty.She must go home late.So I wanted to try to make dinner.I boiled some noodles first.Then I cut up some tomatoes and broke two eggs.Put them into the noodles.When my mother came back home，I had already made two bowls of noodles with tomatoes and eggs.My mother was surprised and happy.She praised me.I was happy，too.【點評】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者按照題目的要求，敘述了自己一次做家務(wù)的經(jīng)歷。首先這篇短文的內(nèi)容非常完整，有頭有尾，要點全面；其次短文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明；而且這篇短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，符合英語的表達規(guī)范。作者寫作時，還使用了較為豐富的句型，如時間狀語從句和原因狀語從句，使得整篇短文意思流暢、連貫。有必要(30%)沒有必要(70%)1.學(xué)會如何照顧自己。1.學(xué)生的任務(wù)是學(xué)習(xí)而不是勞動。2.做家務(wù)可以培養(yǎng)吃苦耐勞的精神。2.學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)繁重，沒有做家務(wù)的時間。3.做家務(wù)可以體驗父母的辛苦。3.做家務(wù)是父母的事情。Is it necessary for students to do housework at home？We did a survey about this.According to the result，we know most of the students think it is unnecessary for students to do housework. They think it is the job of their parents.As students，their duty is to study hard.They have no time to do housework because of the heavy homework.On the other hand，some students think it is good for them to do housework.Because they can learn how to look after themselves by doing it，and know how hard their parents are.It also helps them to develop the spirit to work hard.I think we students should spend some time on housework，no matter how busy we are.