高一英語短文改錯專項練習(一).docx

高一英語短文改錯專項練習(一) 命題人：右臂 審題人：左膀 2016.11.8 高老師的左膀右臂祝大家期中考順利假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。 2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。ANearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I plantedsome cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!B It is three years now since I graduate from Xinhua High School. Last Sunday, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed a precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places.C Im an Australian boy aging 17 and Im crazy about music. It is one of the most important thing in my life. I listen music whenever I can. I have a minidisk player, with it I can have access to music whether walking in the street or ride on the bus. At home, there has a CD player in my room, and the music is on all the time. I like rock music best of all. My favorite band is Rolling Stones, which had produced 40 albums since 1966. It so happened that there was a living concert of Rolling Stones last Sunday. I decided to go. It was a great fun. I am also fond of classical music. I especially enjoy playing Beethoven once I am doing my homework. D E Time fly like an arrow. Im already in the second half of Senior Grade 3 beforeI realized it. It is only a little more than three months before I graduate middle school.At the present, Im busy review my lessons in order to take the College EntranceExamination. I hope to go to Beijing University, that is one of the best universities notonly in China but also in the world. Ill try my best turn my dream to reality. Most of my classmates are also studying very hard to realize their dreams. I do wish everyone willbe able to enter an university or college.FIn order to promote participation in outdoor exercise, our school had organized an activity to climb the West Mountain on April 10. The moment we arrived at the foot of a mountain, we set out for the top in high spirit. We supported each other to pass the rocky areas on the course of the climb. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, there we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was extremely beautiful This event was very benefit, for not only we take a break from our heavy school workload, but we also learned what to cooperate. Therefore, we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!答案and解析：A1:beforeago. ago “從現(xiàn)在起的若干時間以前”；時間段+ago與一般過去時連用。before泛指“從過去起的若干時間以前”，意思是 “距過去某時以前”“與其（毋寧）”，常和完成時連用，這里謂語動詞planted用的是過去式，故用ago。2:在的幫助下用固定搭配with the help of。所以把by改成of。3:根據(jù)句意和前面的all these 可知，用可數(shù)名詞year的復數(shù)形式y(tǒng)ears。all these years 的意思是這么多年。4:根據(jù)時間狀語Since then可知，本句用現(xiàn)在完成進行時。所以把 had 變成have。5:as a result 是固定搭配。所以在As和 result之間加a。6:因為哪里落了種子就在哪里長，所以這種植物長得到處是。所以把somewhere（某地）改成everywhere（到處）。7:這種果子個頭小，但是汁多、味道好。這里放在are后面，應該用形容詞。所以把taste改成tasty。8:根據(jù)后面的them可知，這里用many表示可數(shù)名詞的許多，而much修飾不可數(shù)名詞。所以把much 改成many。9:英語中although是連詞，but是并列連詞。所以不能同時用。所以把but改成yet或去掉but。10:tomatoes 是名詞，應該用形容詞來修飾。副詞常常修飾動詞。所以把wonderfully改為wonderful。B1:graduate graduated 畢業(yè)是一個過去發(fā)生的事情，使用過去時2:on in 在具體的哪個班級使用介詞in3:time后加to 固定句型it takes sb some time to do sth4:well good time是名詞，應該使用形容詞修飾5:athe 冠詞錯用。根據(jù)句意，此處特指：“聚會的那一天”，應該用定冠詞the6:remember remembering remember與we構(gòu)成主動關系，用現(xiàn)在分詞7:they we與上文一致，是我們熟悉的人8:which that that引導起真正的主語從句9:to去掉 多介詞。abroad為副詞，表示“到國外；在國外”用go abroad，無需再加介詞to10:card cards根據(jù)上下文可知這里應該使用復數(shù)形式C1. aging-aged aged作形容詞，意為.歲的，后跟數(shù)詞，只能作后置定語，這是aged的特殊 用法2. thing-things one of+形容詞最高級+可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)3. listen后加to listen為不及物動詞，在加賓語時必須借助介詞to4. it-which本句為定語從句，此處指代minidisk player，且在下半句中作with的賓語，所以應用關系代詞which來引導。It不能引導定語從句5. ride-riding此處whether.or.連接兩個并列結(jié)構(gòu)，形式需與walking保持一致,表示兩種狀態(tài)6. has-is there be句型7. had-has 時間狀語為1996，其謂語動詞應該用現(xiàn)在完成時8. living-live living用作adj作前置定語一般表示活著的，現(xiàn)存的；而此處表示 非錄音的，現(xiàn)場直播的，應該用形容詞live9. a great fun 中的a去掉 fun作名詞時，為不可數(shù)名詞10. once- when此處表示當.的時候，once表示一旦.，不符合語境DETimeflylike an arrow. Im already in the second half of Senior Grade 3 before 1. fliesIrealizedit. It is only a little more than three months before I graduate2. realize 3. frommiddle school. Atthepresent, Im busyreviewmy lessons in order to take 4. 去掉5 . reviewingthe College Entrance Examination. I hope to go to Beijing University,thatis one 6. whichof the best universities not only in China but also in the world. Ill try my best turn 7. tomy dreamtoreality. Most of my classmates are also studying very hard to realize 8. intotheirwishes. I do wish everyone will be able to enteranuniversity or college. 9.hope 10. aF本文講述了作者參加的學校組織的一次爬山活動，簡單描述了當時的情景以及過后的體會?！拘☆}1】去掉had 考查時態(tài)。本文主要講述了作者的學校組織的一次活動，故用一般過去時。把had organized改成organized，句意為：我們學校在4月10日組織了一次爬西山的活動。【小題2】athe 考查冠詞。根據(jù)上文可知學校組織了爬西山這一活動，本句再次提到這座山，是特指，故把a改成the。句意為：我們一到達山腳。【小題3】spiritspirits 考查名詞。考查了固定搭配：in high spirits，句意為：情緒高漲、興高采烈。故把spirit改成spirits。句意為：我們興高采烈地開始向山頂出發(fā)?！拘☆}4】onin/during 考查介詞。根據(jù)下文的course，可知是在爬山的過程中大家互相鼓勵。故把on改成in或during?！拘☆}5】therewhere或者在there前加上and 考查定語從句或并列句。there之前是一個逗號，故之后不可以是一個完整的句子。改正方法一：把there改成where，構(gòu)成定語從句，先行詞為the summit，代入從句中擔當?shù)攸c狀語。改正方法二：在there前加上and，形成并列句即可。【小題6】ViewingViewed 考查非謂語動詞。本句考查非謂語動詞擔當狀語，主句主語為the city，和動詞view之間存在被動關系，故把viewing改成viewed，形成被動關系。句意為：從山頂看，城市尤其美麗。【小題7】benefitbeneficial 考查形容詞擔當表語。本句考查形容詞擔當表語，故把benefit改成beneficial，句意為：這次事件非常有好處。【小題8】only后加上did 考查倒裝。本句考查not only放在句首前，句子需要部分倒裝這一用法，故在only后加上did，構(gòu)成部分倒裝。句意為：因為我們不僅從繁忙的學業(yè)中得到了休息，。【小題9】whathow 考查疑問詞。根據(jù)下文的cooperate可知，此處指的是如何合作而非合作什么。故把what改成how，句意為：我們也學會了該如何合作?！拘☆}10】arebe 考查虛擬語氣。此處考查suggest表示建議時，如果其后接賓語從句，從句中使用虛擬語氣：should+動詞原形且should可以省略這一用法，故把are改成should be，同時should可省這一用法。4 / 4