高一英語短文改錯.doc

高一英語短文改錯1. Having a dream is of great importance. Your dreams are ordinary and realistic. I hope I will admitted into a top university and become a good doctor after I will graduate from university. I hoped one day I can find a cure for cancer. I hope those whom love me and those whom I love will be healthy and live happy every day. To realize my dreams, I will take more exercises to build up my body. I will try my best to focus time and energy to my study. I must work hard at my lessons or be fully preparing for the entrance exam. 【小題1】通篇都在講我的夢想，因此代詞Your- My?！拘☆}2】will 加動詞原形，“被錄取” be admitted into ,will 后面加be.2.One night, I was on my way home for my Christmas holiday when my car broke down. It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night. I decided to walk around a little after accepting that Id have to spend the night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone. Actually, I didnt have to walk far before I found the small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room. I knocked the door was delighted when a pleasant old man opened the door and listened to my story carefully. He said he had no telephone and that it wasnt any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car.【答案】1. complete改為completely 2. in改為on 3.after改為before4. can改為could 5.the改為a 6. shone改為shining 7.knocked后加at/ on8.was前加and 9.it改為there 10. who刪掉3.My name is Li Hua. I was born in Qingdao，Shandong province on February 1995I started the school in 2001 when I was six. I studied happy in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007. After that I went to No. 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate last summerThe main subjects I study at schoo1 included Chinese，maths，English，physics，chemistry and computerI like English and computer best and I am very good at it .Last year I winned first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stampMy favourite sports is swimming in summer and skating in winter【答案】【小題1】on-in 【小題2】去掉the 【小題3】happy- happily【小題4】graduate- graduated 【小題5】study- studied 【小題6】it-them【小題7】winned-won【小題8】listening- listening to【小題9】stamp- stamps 【小題10】is-are 【解析】4.Mary is a high school student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day. Last Saturday,as usual, she went to several class. In the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night.She was too sleepy and tired that she couldnt work effectively. On the Sunday morning, she wasabout to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. We decided to go cycling in the countryside. Mary enjoyed herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class.【答案】【小題1】devoted改為devotes【小題2】class改為classes【小題3】deeply改為deep【小題4】too改為so 【小題5】去掉the【小題6】while改為when 【小題7】加上with 【小題8】We改為They【小題9】relaxing改為relaxed 【小題10】but改為and5.Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain can not stop us. We set off early and went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirit. On either side of the road was green fields. We could hear the sound of the rain mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached to the top of the mountain, there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes. After short rest, we started going down It rained more harder. We were wet all over, and we still felt happy.【答案】【小題1】can 改為could【小題2】extreme改為extremely【小題3】spirit改為spirits【小題4】was改為were【小題5】mixing改為mixed【小題6】去掉top【小題7】theres改為where【小題8】加上a【小題9】more改為much【小題10】and改為but6.Even today, a man with good manner will politely open the door for a lady, help her put on her coat when necessary and see her safely to the door of her home before a date. When a man takes a woman out for a dinner, it is considered impolite to help her with her chair when she gets up or sits down. On a crowding train or bus, it is proper for a man offer a woman his seat, particular if she is old or carries a baby. Even when it comes to shake hands, ladies come first. It is impolite for a man to extend his hand for a handshake upon first greeting. Unless a woman does not extend her hand to the man first, the man shouldnt offer theirs.7.Dear Mike,How are you doing? Thank you for your help and good treat while I was stayed in Sydney last summer vacation. You were so kindly and friendly to treat me to the local food, and take us to do a lot of sightseeing. Its really nice to visit Sydney, which beautiful scenery and delicious food gave me a better impression. I have a great time here and learned a lot about Sydney. Mike, are you free these days? I would like to invite you visit China. Ill act like a guide to show you around the places of interests in my hometown. Yours, Li Hua【答案】【小題1】was去掉【小題2】kindly-kind【小題3】us-me【小題4】which-whose【小題5】better-good【小題6】have-had【小題7】here-there【小題8】to visit【小題9】like-as【小題10】interests-interest8.When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore. I couldnt understand “real music” After I graduated from high school, the friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. Here I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my first guitar teacher. There were too many wonderful models to choose that it took me a long time to buy one Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day. 9.This morning , I go to the store near my home to do some shopping.I was walking down the passage while I gave a violent cough. The woman standing next to me was so shocking that she consequently dropped a jar of oil. For that very moment, a girl was walking by. She slipped on the oil, fell onto the broke glass and hit her head on the floor. After a while ,there were blood pour down her face. I felt really guilty and sent the girl to the nearest hospital without the delay. The doctor examined her wound carefully. To my relief, it was not serious. The girl had a little smile on her face before the doctor dressed wound. 【答案】【小題1】go-went【小題2】while-when【小題3】shocking-shocked,【小題4】For-At,【小題5】broke-broken, 【小題6】were-was,【小題7】pour-pouring,【小題8】the delay去the,【小題9】before-after，【小題10】wound前加 the/her10.Dear schoolmates，In order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environment and raise our awareness to protect the environment，and China Daily is planning to hold an interestingly knowledge contestA contest starts on October 14th and end on 31 stRemember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school studentThe answer sheet must cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadlinePlease pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in them on timeStudents Union【答案】【小題1】attaching 改為attach 【小題2】第二行and去掉 【小題3】interestingly改為interesting【小題4】第三行A改為The【小題5】end后面加s【小題6】第四行that改為which 【小題7】student后面加s【小題8】must后面加be 【小題9】after改為before 10.最后一句them改為it11.Dear Andy, Im glad to hear from you. You ask about my health in your last email. So Im going to tell you about diet. Im a very health person. Thats why we live near the sea and we often have fish. I dont know exactly what my mother will cook for us tonight, and there will probable be fish and vegetables. And of course there will also be some rices. If you come to visit me in China on one day, you wont eat many sweets. So I hope you dont have sweet tooth.Im going to ask my father to take some photos for the football match and Ill email them to you. I think youll like our teams clothes.12.Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. Thirty minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, Ill think of this experience.【答案】【小題1】添加for【小題2】past改為pasted 【小題3】feet改為foot【小題4】when改為than【小題5】a改為the【小題6】other改為another【小題7】do改為did【小題8】possible改為possibly【小題9】去掉it【小題10】lose改為losing13.The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. Id like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time Ill have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They dont want me go out. They are afraid Ill be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.【答案】【小題1】made改為makes；【小題2】at改為to；【小題3】movie改為movies【小題4】去掉the；【小題5】How改為What；【小題6】different 改為differently【小題7】加to；【小題8】fallen改為fall；【小題9】Beside改為Besides；【小題10】keeping改為kept；