2020年中考英語重難點專練二十 書面表達圖表類(含解析)



重難點20 書面表達圖表類【命題趨勢】圖表作文是中考英語寫作中較為常見的題型之一,也是難度較大的一種寫作題型這類作文可綜合提供題目、數據、圖像、提綱形式多樣,但實際上只涉及5個方面描述圖表、指明寓意、分析原因、聯(lián)系實際、給出建議而每次考試只是這5個方面的內容中選出3個進行考查從寫作關型來看,基本上屬于說明文要求考生圍繞題目將有關信息轉化為文字形式,考生應該具有一定的數據分析和材料歸納能力,同時會運用一定的寫作方法滿分技巧】認真審題審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵審題時要注意試題的要求,抓住要點,詞數符合要求構思提綱有了提綱,我們就可以根據提綱和主題確定相關 寫作材料通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當的素材也是使短文中心突出、明確的關鍵初寫短文一切都準備就緒,就可以動筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞同時還要注意使用恰當的連詞,使句子銜接自然修改潤色修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外,還要檢查語法結構是否合理,有無重復、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數是否符合要求等。
熱點話題】 閱讀、英語學習、活動介紹等說明類的書面表達限時檢測】(建議用時:30分鐘)A【2019 ?山西省】閱讀是同學們未來參與社會應具備的關鍵能力,無論你喜歡哪種閱讀方式,它都能讓你增長知識,開闊眼界最近,某出版社在兩萬人中,針對人們喜歡的閱讀方式做了一項調查,下圖是相關的統(tǒng)計結果,其中包括電子閱讀和紙質閱讀的人數請你用兩段話寫一篇短文,第一段用百分比簡要說明圖表內容,第二段從圖表中選出一項你喜歡的閱讀方式,結合自己的經歷,談談這種閱讀方式的好處要求:1. 詞數不少于 80 詞;2. 首句已給出,不計入總詞數參考詞匯僅供參考;3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名 WORD BANK reading on mobile phones others books reading paper________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫作思路】這篇作文要求我們對一個人們喜歡的閱讀方式的調查結果進行介紹,并結合實際,談一談自己喜歡的閱讀方式。
審題可知,短文應主要包括兩部分內容:首先仔細觀察圖表,用百分比簡要說明圖表內容;然后選擇其中一項你喜歡的閱讀方式,結合自己的經歷,談一談這種閱讀方式的好處短文應以一般現(xiàn)在時為主,根據表達需要選擇適當的人稱,第二部分內容應以第一人稱為主敘述寫作時應注意:文章應包括題目中的所有內容,尤其注意仔細觀察圖表,將圖表中的信息表達清楚、準確其次應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同,不能根據漢語思維逐詞翻譯應從句子的整體結構考慮,選擇適當的句型、短語和詞匯,語句通順,表達清楚句式結構可以簡單句為基礎,穿插并列句和復合句,以及其他復雜結構,提升文章檔次同時注意語句之間使用恰當的連接成分,使上下文意連貫、自然參考范文】Recently, a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading. Here is what we have learned from it. 60% of the people like to read on mobile phones or e-readers, while only 38.4% choose to read paper books. So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books. However, whatever way of reading we choose, it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes.As for me, I am still used to reading paper books. Whenever I open a paper book, the smell of paper reminds me of the stories in the books from my mom when I was a little kid. Just because of this, I got into the habit of reading. So when I read paper books now, they always bring me the old feelings. On the other hand, compared with the electronic devices, reading paper books is good for eyes. So you see, I believe e-books won’t take the place of paper books in my heart.B【2019 ?重慶市B卷】假如你參加了學校組織的“走近鄉(xiāng)村”寒假社會實踐活動。
請根據要求,向某英語網站投稿,分享活動經歷要求:1.80~120詞,可適當發(fā)揮,開頭已給出,不計入總詞數; 2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱參考信息:Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫作思路】本文屬于一篇圖表作文,根據表格提供的信息來介紹“走近鄉(xiāng)村”寒假社會實踐活動的經歷。
人稱為第一人稱,時態(tài)主要為一般過去時動筆前先要注意認真閱讀材料確定寫作內容;文章必須包括要點中所給的信息,既要寫活動的過程,又要總結活動感受與收獲并補充兩條個人的觀點表達要符合英語習慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題寫作中適當使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關系,表達具有條理性多種句式交叉使用來豐富文章的文采高分句型:1.We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldn’t get from books before. 我們經歷了農村的生活,學到了一些我們以前從書中得不到的東西that we couldn’t get from books before.是定語從句,修飾不定代詞something2. We really hope we’ll have another activity like that this winter vacation! 我們真的希望今年寒假還能有這樣的活動!hope后面是省略that的賓語從句參考范文】Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine.During the winter vacation my classmates and I joined in the school activity “Get close to the countryside”. We live in the famers’ homes. Their great living conditions surprised us a lot. Do you know where vegetables come from? We got the answer when working with the farmers. Besides, we learned about other plants and some farm animals. How interesting!We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldn’t get from books before, and felt the wonderful changes of the countryside. We realized how hard the farmers worked and decided to save food. We were happy to see the farmers’ life was getting better and better. We really hope we’ll have another activity like that this winter vacation!C【2019 ?山東省濰坊市】請根據上文內容和下列問題提示進行續(xù)寫,使之構成一個完整的故事。
注意:1.續(xù)寫故事的詞數為80左右; 2. 展開合理想象,適當發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫; 3. 可根據需要自主選用以下參考詞匯: Call the police dangerous escape catch robber (強盜)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫作思路】這是一篇根據短文內容和圖表提示,要求續(xù)寫一個完整的故事。
動筆前先要認真閱讀要點,圍繞要點組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來,在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點根據材料可知本文主要是應用第三人稱,一般過去時態(tài),注意標點符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯誤注意上下文之間的邏輯關系,語意連貫參考范文】A“A knife ! My God ! He was really dangerous .It was wise to drive him off my car .” Andrea thought .Then she breathed deeply and called the police to tell them what had happened .A moment later , the police came to her .Andrea pointed to the direction the “old lady” might be in .Then the police drove along the road to look for “her” . How amazing ! The police were surprised to see that the “old lady” was still standing by the road .The police stopped and said , “Hello ,madam .We’d like to take you to Brockboune ,Get in ,please .” B"How dangerous! What should I do?" Andrea said to herself "He must be a thief or robber .” As soon as she realized this, Andrea drove to the nearest police station and told the police what had happened ,then she left .When Andrea got home, she told her parents all about the "old lady". After hearing the story, her parents hugged her tightly and said ,”What a lucky girl ! You are brave and smart enough to protect yourself .We are proud of you!” An hour later, the police phoned her that they had caught the man-a real robber.D【2019 ?浙江省湖州市】5月18日是國際博物館日,下圖是你班同學參觀博物館的情況。
請你結合調查結果、自己的參觀經歷和感受,寫一份報告,并在英語課上匯報注意:1. 詞數:80-100 (短文首句已給出,不計入總詞數); 2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名寫作思路】這是一篇圖表,是同學參觀博物館的情況,結合調查結果、自己的參觀經歷和感受,寫一份報告,并在英語課上匯報動筆前先要認真閱讀要點,圍繞要點組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來,在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點根據材料注意人稱和時態(tài)的不同,注意標點符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯誤注意上下文之間的邏輯關系,語意連貫參考范文】Visiting museums has become one of the most popular ways for us students to spend our spare time. According to the survey made in our class, almost all the students have been to museums, such as science museums, tea museums and film museums, etc.Among them, the science museum is our favorite.I've been to Huzhou Science Museum and Lu Yu Tea Museum. I like the tea museum very much, because I can learn about the histor and development of tea and watch the tea art performances there as well. What I'm interested in most is the show of beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impression on me.Museums make it possible for us students to learn knowledge and experience cultures at the same time. Why not visit more?E【2019 ?山東省濟寧市】假如你是Wang Hong, 你的美國筆友Kevin下學期將作為名交換生來你們學校。
下面是他發(fā)給你的一封e-mail.請根據郵件內容給予恰當的回復注意:1.文中不得出現(xiàn)可能透露考生真實身份的任何信息.2.100詞左右(開頭,結尾已給出,不計人總詞數)Dear Wang Hong,How are you doing?You might not believe it, but I’m going to your school as one of five exchange students next term. And I’m so excited! However, I’m worried about communicating with the teachers and students. As you know, I can speak only a little Chinese. What should I do? Besides, I want to learn to play pin-pong. Can you find a good player to help me? If you can, tell me something about him or her.Looking forward to your reply Best wishes! Yours,Kevin參考詞語talk in English, help sb. with, be friendly and helpful, practice... with, play well, win a good prize.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫作思路】這是一篇圖表,要求介紹自己。
動筆前先要認真閱讀要點,圍繞要點組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來,在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點根據材料注意不同的時態(tài)和人稱,注意標點符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯誤注意上下文之間的邏輯關系,語意連貫參考范文】Dear KevinI’m glad to hear from you. You said you were worried about communicating with the teachers and students because you could speak only a little Chinese. You don’t be worried about it. You can talk with them in English. They can also help you with Chinese. They are very friendly and helpful. You also said you wanted to learn to play ping-pong. You can practice it with Li Lei. He is my best friend. He plays it very well. He won a good prize last week. He is ready to do others. With his help, you will be good at it.Welcome to our school.Best wishes.YoursWang Hong8。