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1、寫作規(guī)范練(八)(限時:35分鐘)寫作(共兩節(jié),滿分35分)第一節(jié)短文改錯(共10小題;每小題1分,滿分10分)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。2019唐山一模I like seeing English movies. In my spare t
2、ime, Id like to find and enjoying hot movies, among that The Lord of the Rings impresses me most. It has three series and I like both of them. Though the first volume was released on 2001, it is still not out of the date. In the movie, the scenery is so beautifully that I cant move my eyes away. It
3、is shot in New Zealand but I decide to go there some day. It shows me a world science fiction, where there are all kinds of creature. Movies give me pleasure and enlarge my vision.答案與解析:I like seeing English movies. In my spare time, Id like to find and hot movies, among The Lord of the Rings impres
4、ses me most. It has three series and I like of them. Though the first volume was released 2001, it is still not out of the date. In the movie, the scenery is so that I cant move my eyes away. It shot in New Zealand I decide to go there some day. It shows me a world science fiction, where there are a
5、ll kinds of . Movies give me pleasure and enlarge my vision.enjoying改為enjoy本句謂語動詞后的find與enjoy應是并列關系,would like to do sth.為固定用法,故將enjoying改為enjoy。that改為which分析句子結構可知,此處引導非限制性定語從句,hot movies為先行詞,指物,引導詞前有介詞among,應用which引導該從句,故將that改為which。both改為all根據(jù)上文中提到的three series可知,指環(huán)王有三部,both指“兩者”;all指“三者或三者以上”,所
6、以此處應用all來指代,故將both改為all。on改為in年份前通常用介詞in,故將on改為in。刪除theout of date意為“過時”,是固定短語,故刪除the。beautifully改為beautiful分析句子結構可知,此處作系動詞is的表語,表示主語的狀態(tài)或特征,應用形容詞,故將beautifully改為beautiful。is改為was該系列電影于20012003年間上映,為過去事件,應用一般過去時,故將is改為was。but改為and根據(jù)句意可知,“該系列電影拍攝于新西蘭”和“我決定將來有一天去那里”之間為并列關系,并非轉折關系,故將but改為and。在world后加ofa
7、 world of science fiction意為“科幻世界”,其中of表示所屬關系,故在world后加of。creature改為creaturescreature意為“生物”,為可數(shù)名詞,且根據(jù)前面的all kinds of可以確定此處應用復數(shù)形式,故將creature改為creatures。第二節(jié)書面表達(滿分25分)2019山東省、湖北省聯(lián)考假定你是李華,你的英國朋友Terry一行人要來你市體驗元宵節(jié),他請你幫他們預訂酒店,請你給他回一封電子郵件。要點如下: 1.表示歡迎; 2.詢問到達時間; 3.詢問具體要求(價位、房間數(shù)等)。注意:1詞數(shù)100左右;2可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連
8、貫。參考范文:Dear Terry,Im honored to know that youve decided to have a taste of the Lantern Festival in my city. Im also more than pleased to reserve a hotel for you in advance. But I need some details of your travel.Firstly, when will your flight arrive at the airport? If Im available then, I will pick
9、you up. Besides, prices of a hotel room range from RMB 399 to 999, so which kind of rooms do you prefer? And more importantly, how many rooms do you exactly need? Only if I figure out all of the questions can I make reservations for you.Please give me more detailed information about your schedule. Looking forward to your early coming.Yours sincerely,Li Hua- 3 -