2020版高考英語大二輪復(fù)習(xí) 專題六 寫作規(guī)范練（八）

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1、寫作規(guī)范練(八) (限時：35分鐘) 寫作(共兩節(jié)，滿分35分) 第一節(jié)　短文改錯(共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。 修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。 [2019·唐山一模]I like seeing En

2、glish movies. In my spare time, I'd like to find and enjoying hot movies, among that The Lord of the Rings impresses me most. It has three series and I like both of them. Though the first volume was released on 2001, it is still not out of the date. In the movie, the scenery is so beautifully that

3、I can't move my eyes away. It is shot in New Zealand but I decide to go there some day. It shows me a world science fiction, where there are all kinds of creature. Movies give me pleasure and enlarge my vision. 答案與解析： I like seeing English movies. In my spare time, I'd like to find and hot movie

4、s, among The Lord of the Rings impresses me most. It has three series and I like of them. Though the first volume was released 2001, it is still not out of the date. In the movie, the scenery is so that I can't move my eyes away. It shot in New Zealand I decide to go there some day. It

5、shows me a world science fiction, where there are all kinds of . Movies give me pleasure and enlarge my vision. ①enjoying改為enjoy　本句謂語動詞后的find與enjoy應(yīng)是并列關(guān)系，would like to do sth.為固定用法，故將enjoying改為enjoy。 ②that改為which　分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，此處引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，hot movies為先行詞，指物，引導(dǎo)詞前有介詞among，應(yīng)用which引導(dǎo)該從句，故將that改為which。

6、③both改為all　根據(jù)上文中提到的three series可知，《指環(huán)王》有三部，both指“兩者”；all指“三者或三者以上”，所以此處應(yīng)用all來指代，故將both改為all。 ④on改為in　年份前通常用介詞in，故將on改為in。 ⑤刪除the　out of date意為“過時”，是固定短語，故刪除the。 ⑥beautifully改為beautiful　分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，此處作系動詞is的表語，表示主語的狀態(tài)或特征，應(yīng)用形容詞，故將beautifully改為beautiful。 ⑦is改為was　該系列電影于2001～2003年間上映，為過去事件，應(yīng)用一般過去時，故將is

7、改為was。 ⑧but改為and　根據(jù)句意可知，“該系列電影拍攝于新西蘭”和“我決定將來有一天去那里”之間為并列關(guān)系，并非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故將but改為and。 ⑨在world后加of　a world of science fiction意為“科幻世界”，其中of表示所屬關(guān)系，故在world后加of。 ⑩creature改為creatures　creature意為“生物”，為可數(shù)名詞，且根據(jù)前面的all kinds of可以確定此處應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故將creature改為creatures。 第二節(jié)　書面表達(滿分25分) [2019·山東省、湖北省聯(lián)考]假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Terry

8、一行人要來你市體驗元宵節(jié)，他請你幫他們預(yù)訂酒店，請你給他回一封電子郵件。要點如下： 1.表示歡迎； 2.詢問到達時間； 3.詢問具體要求(價位、房間數(shù)等)。 注意： 1．詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 參考范文： Dear Terry， I'm honored to know that you've decided to have a taste of the Lantern Festival in my city. I'm also more than pleased to reserve a hotel for you in advan

9、ce. But I need some details of your travel. Firstly, when will your flight arrive at the airport? If I'm available then, I will pick you up. Besides, prices of a hotel room range from RMB 399 to 999, so which kind of rooms do you prefer? And more importantly, how many rooms do you exactly need? Only if I figure out all of the questions can I make reservations for you. Please give me more detailed information about your schedule. Looking forward to your early coming. Yours sincerely， Li Hua - 3 -