上課用高考短文改錯(cuò)公開(kāi)課課件.ppt

Proof Reading 短文改錯(cuò),生活中，人人都會(huì)犯錯(cuò)，有錯(cuò)就知改。 寫(xiě)作中，人人也會(huì)犯錯(cuò)，有錯(cuò)也要改。,Play a game,Find the wrong words and correct them.,Be strict at sb Be responsible with sb/sth Be in business Have sth on common Have an effect in sb Lose the heart Make a great progress The war was broke out The accident was happened In the hurry Share sth for sb A pair of shoe A lot of equipments General speaking As soon as possibly,with for on in on,a with Shoes equipment Generally possible,What is proof reading?,知短文改錯(cuò) 則百戰(zhàn)不殆,1. correct some grammar mistakes 2. connection between sentences 3. the main idea of the whole passage,設(shè)錯(cuò)方式？,改錯(cuò)格式？,多詞 缺詞 錯(cuò)詞,假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你 同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。 錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)()，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。 修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。 注意： 1每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。,改錯(cuò)步驟,1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(瀏覽全文，掌握大意）,2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the grammar mistakes.（分句閱讀，逐行找錯(cuò)）,3. Read the passage again, check your answers.（檢查核對(duì)，敲定終稿）,6,I often dream of a teacher. I dream of standing on the _ platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys . _ and girls. I teach them, play with them, but watch them . _ growing up. I am always young when I was staying . _ with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. You . _ have to learn in order to teach. Without enough knowledges . _ you can never learn well. What is more, you have to be . _ friends with your pupils and take good care of him. . _ Only in this way can you are a good teacher and win _ respect from them. Though I am a student now, I will work as very hard to make my dream come true. _,being,giving,and,am,it,knowledge,teach,them,be,Homework-Check your answers,How many kinds of mistakes in this Proof Reading?,How many kinds of mistakes in this Proof Reading?,Proof Reading,動(dòng)詞,名詞,冠詞,代詞,連詞,介詞,形容.副詞,近5年全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷短文改錯(cuò)題考點(diǎn)一覽表,小組合作，討論學(xué)案中 的突破考點(diǎn)內(nèi)容,Discuss in groups,3minutes Quickly!,小試牛刀,1.(2010全國(guó)）On the box was a card say “ 25 cents each” 2.The Great Wall of China is one of the largest construction projects ever complete. 3.(2012全國(guó)) I win a national prize for painting last week. 4.(2013全國(guó)) Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. 5.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. 6.Among the parks trees there are a science hall, an art centre, a gym,and,saying,won,drunk,completed,hold,is,一、動(dòng)詞,歸納總結(jié),錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在,時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、主謂一致、動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)、,非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞（to do/ doing/ done）,小試牛刀,1.(2010全國(guó)) If they had said was true, I would have a chance of winning the prize. 2.(13全國(guó)) In fact, my grandfather even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.,3.I will be very glad whether I can work with you.,what,when,if,if,whether,如果 條件狀語(yǔ)從句,是否 及物動(dòng)詞后的賓語(yǔ)從句且沒(méi)有or not,是否 通常引導(dǎo)名詞性從句,二、連詞,小試牛刀,歸納總結(jié),錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在,并列連詞和從屬連詞的漏用和錯(cuò)用， 上下文邏輯關(guān)系理解錯(cuò)用,4.(2011全國(guó)) I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.,5.I received my mothers call telling me she would come, but I had to cancel the appointments with you.,and,so,小試牛刀,1.(2011全國(guó))It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. 2.(2014全國(guó)) When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.,3.After learning English for several years, I have made a great progress. 4.If I choose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for another 30 minutes.,5.All in all, Joey is a very special dog because he has overcome unpleasant start in life.,luggage,cups,the,an,三、名詞 四、 冠詞,名詞錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在,單復(fù)數(shù)；可數(shù)與不可數(shù)；,歸納總結(jié),冠詞錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在,泛指與特指；a.an.the 混用 漏用和多用,小試牛刀,1.(2012全國(guó)) My father was so pleasing that he suggested I go to England for a holiday. 2.(2014全國(guó)) The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. 3.(2014全國(guó)) We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost.,五、形容副詞,pleased,tasty,4.Being a member of the Students Union makes me capable of organizing various activities. However, I am convinced that I can keep the class organized and lively.,Therefore,5.We gave our thanks to our teachers who had been educating us patient.,patiently,wonderful,歸納總結(jié),錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在,詞性錯(cuò)用，副詞混用； 原級(jí)、比較級(jí) 最高級(jí)的混用,小試牛刀,1.(2010全國(guó))Before her leaving, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him. 2.To make my dream come true, I have told me over and over again that Ill concentrate more on studies. 3. Every year more and more people start a stamp collection of your own .,歸納總結(jié),錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在,六、代詞,her,myself,指代錯(cuò)誤；人稱代詞和反身代詞的誤用；主格賓格；關(guān)系代詞和連接代詞（復(fù)合句，名詞性、定語(yǔ)從句）,their,小試牛刀,1.(2011全國(guó))Luckily I had all my money on my pocket. 2.(2014全國(guó)) Nearly five years ago and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes in our back garden.,歸納總結(jié),錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在,七、介詞,in,of,固定搭配,聚沙成塔-Summary,動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài) 主謂一致勿忘記 還要注意非謂語(yǔ) 名詞多考單復(fù)數(shù) 連詞并列和從屬 上下邏輯要清楚 形容副詞看詞性 代詞前后要一致 介詞搭配要記牢 還有冠詞a/an/the 改完復(fù)查敲定稿,Attention,三不改,四原則,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改 字母大小不改 詞語(yǔ)順序不改,以保持句子原義為原則 改動(dòng)以最少為原則 實(shí)詞以改變?cè)~形為原則 虛詞以添加或刪除為原則,做完能力提升中的單句 改錯(cuò)和短文改錯(cuò),Challenge yourself!,1. My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US, which was very interested. 2. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou. 3. Since thenfor all these yearswe had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please. 4. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman living near my house, who was a very much famous writer.,(2010-2014全國(guó)卷),a,buying,has,a,interesting,5. However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. 6. For a while my parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. 7. How many times have you walked out of a room and leave the lights or television when no one else was there?,flew,left,what,My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day. My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.,2014全國(guó)卷短文改錯(cuò),There,dont,much,for,hours,looks,sit,to,helpful,固定句型,動(dòng)詞,介詞,名詞,動(dòng)詞,冠詞,動(dòng)詞,動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ),形容詞,形容詞,What have you learned today?,Summary,7 3 4,7兄弟 3不改 4原則,【解題步驟】,1 瀏覽全文，掌握大意,2 分句閱讀，逐行找錯(cuò),3 檢查核對(duì)，攻克難點(diǎn),4 規(guī)范答題 不留空白,Homework,1. Finish the writing in your paper and correct it by yourself in time.,2. Try to do the after-class exercises by using what we have learned.,必做部分：,選做部分：,The more we practise ,the easier it will be !,