2019版高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí) 專題限時(shí)集訓(xùn)24 短文改錯(cuò)（Ⅰ）（含解析）

專題限時(shí)集訓(xùn)(二十四)短文改錯(cuò)()A(2018·福州市模擬)When asking what I would like to send to the poor children living in the mountain villages，I think of books.On the one hand，the children there are eager to gain knowledges，but they are too poor to go to school.For this reason，I hope we will love the books.On the other hand，I think everyone have the right to education and it is of great important to help those people who need it.My books will give them not wisdom but also happiness.I bet that I will be pleasure to see those children's smile faces in the sunshine after accepting the presents.As a old saying goes，“There is kindness to be found everywhere.” Let's to give presents to people whom we love or who need help.【答案】When what I would like to send to the poor children living in the mountain villages，I think of books.On the one hand，the children there are eager to gain ，but they are too poor to go to school.For this reason，I hope will love the books.On the other hand，I think everyone the right to education and it is of great to help those people who need it.My books will give them not wisdom but also happiness.I bet that I will be to see those children's faces in the sunshine after accepting the presents.As old saying goes，“There is kindness to be found everywhere.” Let's give presents to people whom we love or who need help.B(2018·牡丹江市模擬)I'm writing to tell you something about e-hongbao，what is becoming popular in China.E-hongbao is actually a kind of lucky money from and to relatives and friends during festivals or in special occasions.For many young people，grabbing e-hongbao on their mobile phones are a fairly common and excited activity.Unlike the tradition of elders give lucky money to children，over half of the people sending e-hongbao are in 20s.It's just for a fun or giving best wishes，so the sum of money matters little.In a word，e-hongbao is bringing new color to the old tradition.Therefore，I'm concerned about the safe of on-line payment.So rules and regulations needed to be improved regarding the e-hongbao system to guarantee its operation.【答案】I'm writing to tell you something about e-hongbao， is becoming popular in China.E-hongbao is actually a kind of lucky money from and to relatives and friends during festivals or special occasions.For many young people，grabbing e-hongbao on their mobile phones a fairly common and activity.Unlike the tradition of elders lucky money to children，over half of the people sending e-hongbao are in 20s.It's just for fun or giving best wishes，so the sum of money matters little.In a word，e-hongbao is bringing new color to the old tradition.，I'm concerned about the of on-line payment.So rules and regulations to be improved regarding the e-hongbao system to guarantee its operation.C(2018·泰安市模擬)Last week，my friends invited me go camping to see the sunrise.I felt so exciting and asked for my parents' permission.Luckily，he agreed.We got to the mountain top that we would stay for a whole night.We were singing together while one of my friends were playing the guitar.The next morning，we wake up at about five o'clock.We could not wait to see the sun to come up.After a while，we saw the red color light up the sky gradual.It was so amazing scenery.The beauty in nature impressed me at that moment.【答案】Last week，my friends invited me go camping to see the sunrise.I felt so and asked for my parents' permission.Luckily， agreed.We got to the mountain top we would stay for a whole night.We were singing together while one of my friends playing the guitar.The next morning，we up at about five o'clock.We could not wait to see the sun come up.After a while，we saw the red color light up the sky .It was amazing scenery.The beauty nature impressed me at that moment.D(2018·珠海市模擬)This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank.An old man was counting his money in front of the bank.Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down.To make things bad，his money was lying in all direction.At once the people around rush to pick the money up，while the old man stood there，not know what to do.Surprisingly，everyone gave back the money they had just picked.The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed.To my great joy，there are now a lot of nice people in your life.It's true what honesty is more important than money! 【答案】This morning on my way to school I was moved by what I saw outside a bank.An old man was counting his money in front of the bank.Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down.To make things ，his money was lying in /.At once the people around to pick the money up，while the old man stood there，not what to do.Surprisingly，everyone gave back the money they had just picked .The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was .To my great joy，there are now a lot of nice people in life.It's true honesty is more important than money! 4