山西省2020高考英語二輪復習專題訓練 短文改錯+寫作（11）

山西省2020高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：短文改錯+寫作（11）短文改錯假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Dear Mr Wang,Were so pleased that you are willing to sharing your views.In the course of the general revision, what we needed is a chain of knowledge. As you know, we didnt learn well enough in the first two years, but please slow down and make sure we have real mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for us. As for those important points which also make us confusing, would you please give us more practices in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need our instructions, for example, on how to write with natural English. We still have another request: please dont make us do too many homework.By the way, we often feel worried, which has very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.書面表達假設你是李華，你的網(wǎng)友李明來信訴說他英語基礎(chǔ)不好，學習很吃力，打算放棄這門學科。請根據(jù)以下提示用英語級他回一封e-mail:2. 消極對待英語學習不可取；3. 如何面對英語學習過程中的困難；4. 談談你的英語學習方法。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Li Ming,Ive learned from your last letter that you have difficulty in learning English and intend to give it up. I think its unwise to give up this subject. Otherwise, you might be left far behind because English is necessary for us all.Yours,Li HuaDear Mr Wang,Were so pleased that you are willing to sharing your views.shareIn the course of the general revision, what we needed is a chain of knowledge. As you know,needwe didnt learn well enough in the first two years, but please slow down and make sure we havesoreal mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for us. As for thosereally ourselvesimportant points which also make us confusing, would you please give us more practices in caseconfused practicewe forget? Meanwhile, we need our instructions, for example, on how to write with naturalinEnglish. We still have another request: please dont make us do too many homework.muchBy the way, we often feel worried, which has very bad effect on our study. We wouldaappreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.書面表達：One possible version:Dear Li Ming,Ive learned from your last letter that you have difficulty in learning English and intend to give it up. I think its unwise to give up this subject. Otherwise, you might be left far behind because English is necessary for us all.Negative attitudes are bad for your study and sometimes even make you feel depressed. In the face of learning difficulties, what you need to do is calm down and improve your learning methods, as well as ask your teachers for advice.I believe vocabulary is an important part of English, just like a good foundation for a good building. Also, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides, Ive learned a lot online.Anyway, Rome is not built in a day. Only by sticking to studying can you make progress sin English. I hope my advice can be of some help to you.