英語寫作技巧指導(dǎo)(好詞好句的運(yùn)用).ppt

好詞好句的運(yùn)用 高考英語寫作技巧指導(dǎo),愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,一、新課標(biāo)對(duì)英語寫作能力的要求,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,二、基礎(chǔ)寫作的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),滿分15分 15 = 8（語言）+ 5（內(nèi)容）+ 2（連貫）,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,三、讀寫任務(wù)的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),滿分25分 25 = 5（概括大意）+ 20（正文）,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,基礎(chǔ)寫作： 1、信息點(diǎn)完整； 2、不多不少五句話； 3、語法、單詞拼寫無誤； 4、好詞好句的運(yùn)用； 5、行文自然、流暢。 讀寫任務(wù)： 1、文章要點(diǎn)概括全面； 2、正文內(nèi)容、例子切題； 3、觀點(diǎn)、事例符合邏輯； 4、語法、單詞拼寫無誤； 5、好詞好句的運(yùn)用。,評(píng)分的關(guān)鍵點(diǎn),愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,四、如何構(gòu)成高分作文 以基礎(chǔ)寫作為例,書寫 好詞好句的運(yùn)用： 包括固定表達(dá)及句型, 如：定語從句、名詞性從句、非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)、with的結(jié)構(gòu)等。,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,兩組2012年廣州一模作文的 對(duì)比分析,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,定語從句,這篇關(guān)于兔子和狗的故事，告訴了我們堅(jiān)持(persistence)的重要性。 The passage is about a rabbit and a dog, and it tells us the importance of persistence. The passage, which is about a rabbit and a dog, tells us the importance of persistence.,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,名詞性從句,污水隨意排放到河里的現(xiàn)象已經(jīng)得到了有效的控制。 Polluted water was randomly poured into the river, and this phenomenon has been controlled. The phenomenon that polluted water was randomly poured into the river has been controlled.,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,非謂語結(jié)構(gòu) （to do, -ing, 過去分詞）,坐落在珠江邊的廣州塔，很受游客歡迎。 Guangzhou Tower is near the Pearl River, and its welcomed by tourists. Guangzhou Tower is at the bank of the Pearl River, which is welcomed by tourists. Located / Standing at the bank of the Pearl River, Guangzhou Tower is popular among the tourists.,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,with的結(jié)構(gòu) （with + n.+ -ed/ -ing/adj. / adv./ to do）,他的學(xué)校看起來像個(gè)美麗的花園，到處種滿鮮花。 His school looks like a beautiful garden, and flowers are planted everywhere. His school, where flowers are planted everywhere, looks like a beautiful garden. With many flowers planted around, his school looks like a beautiful garden.,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,好詞好句的重要性,參看一些2012年廣州一模的高分作文,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,常見常用的一些好詞好句,consider / think / regard / treat / count.as. concentrate on / lose oneself in / dive oneself in devote.to. / be devoted to. take it for granted / Believe it or not, . be of help / use / importance / necessity in need / short of / lack of / lack as far as Im concerned / from my perspective / in my opinion / from my point of view To sum up / In short / In a word / To conclude,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,do harm / good to have an influence / effect on strive to / try ones best to do sth. be concerned / anxious about struggle to aim at take measures / steps to do to the contrary / on the opposite think / sing / praise highly of On the one hand.On the other hand keep up with / catch up with plan / mean / intend to do be responsible for take / shoulder the responsibility for,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,remind sb. of To be honest / frank Honestly / Frankly / Totally / Generally / Personally speaking, build up my body / confidence /determination To my surprise / excitement / disappointment Judging from. according to because of / due to / owing to / for instance conduct / carry out / do a survey result in / from come up with / work out / deal with spend time / money (in) doing / on sth.,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,It is no use / good doing sth. It is (un)certain / sure that . It goes without saying that. There is no doubt / denying that. Every coin has two sides. As time goes by / With time going by It is + . + that.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句) Its high time that sb. did / should do sth. It is said / reported / believed / hoped / well known / suggested / mentioned / declared / observed / considered / proved / estimated that. Not only .(半倒裝), but also .,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,好詞好句的積累與掌握,1、從哪里獲得（課文、閱讀文章、諺語、句型歸納的書籍非歌詞或電影對(duì)白） 要養(yǎng)成認(rèn)真聽老師講課文、分析閱讀理解的文章，且看課文或文章時(shí)拿筆劃出里面的詞組、句型或好的表達(dá)的習(xí)慣，哪怕是自己已經(jīng)非常熟悉的take care of等，以加強(qiáng)記憶，方便復(fù)習(xí)。注意，看文章時(shí)，并不需要把所有的生詞都劃出來并查字典。,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,以2011年廣東高考英語試題基礎(chǔ)寫作為例,以下是一本圖書的基本信息及相關(guān)報(bào)道。 基本信息： （1）書名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother （2）作者：Amy Chuo，美籍華人，耶魯*大學(xué)教授 （3）出版時(shí)間：2010年 （4）內(nèi)容：作者用中國傳統(tǒng)教育方式教育兩個(gè)女的故事 （5）效應(yīng)：引發(fā)了中美教育方式孰優(yōu)孰劣的討論 相關(guān)報(bào)道： （1）中文版：2011年初開始在中國銷售 （2）意外反應(yīng)：多數(shù)中國媽媽不贊同作者的做法 （3）最新消息：17歲的大女兒已被哈佛*和耶魯錄取 *耶魯：Yale 哈佛：Harvard 【寫作內(nèi)容】 根據(jù)以上信息寫一篇圖書介紹。,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother by Amy Chua was published in 2010. It tells how the mother, a Chinese American and professor at Yale University, educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Its publication has started a debate as to which way of parenting is superior, the traditional way or the American way.,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,It is reported that the Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011. Unexpectedly, the majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17-year-old elder daughter was lately reported to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale.,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother by Amy Chua was published in 2010. It tells how the mother, a Chinese American and professor at Yale University, educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Its publication has started a debate as to which way of parenting is superior, the traditional way or the American way.,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,It is reported that the Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011. Unexpectedly, the majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17-year-old elder daughter was lately reported to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale.,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,2、如何利用 要學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)好詞好句的整理、分類、歸納 例如：有關(guān)“名人介紹”方面的文章整理 短語和句子 All kinds of myths surround the lives of well-known people. begin ones career as a It isthat changed ones life sb is always devoted to ones cause as a sb is one of the most noticeable figures in the world of sth sb appeared as the symbol of sth sb walks at the latest edges of world culture,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,例如：就一篇文章里關(guān)于“發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)”的表達(dá)的整理 Nowadays, more and more people are in favor of . To be frank, I cant agree more with it. There are several factors contributing to my point. In the first place,. In the second place, . Therefore, it goes without saying that .,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,3、如何記憶 背誦，是最有效的學(xué)習(xí)途經(jīng)，是語言輸入、記憶的必經(jīng)之路，是培養(yǎng)語感的有效方法。 背誦，是有方法可循的?？砂阉醋饕粋€(gè)故事來記憶，或者用自己的獨(dú)特方法。切忌逐字逐句來記憶。,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,Last week, I had an interview with Professor Yang about the middle school students addiction to the Internet. According to Professor Yang, the number of the netizens in our country has incresaed to 338 million, and 25% of them are middle school students, most of whom are plasurfing the Internetying computer games while. Internet addiction will certainly cause them lack of sleep and will have a bad influence on their health and studies.,主題：中學(xué)生上網(wǎng)成癮問題,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,He suggested that schools should try not only to reduce students heavy burden and relieve their stress, but also enrich their after-class activities. He also pointed out that it is useful to improve the relationship between teachers and students and to create a warm and harmonious atmosphere in schools and families. (125 words),愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,Last week, I had an interview with Professor Yang about the middle school students addiction to the Internet. According to Professor Yang, the number of the netizens in our country has incresaed to 338 million, and 25% of them are middle school students, most of whom are playing computer games while surfing the Internet. Internet addiction will certainly cause them lack of sleep and will have a bad influence on their health and studies.,輕松背誦！(Round 1),愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,He suggested that schools should try not only to reduce students heavy burden and relieve their stress, but also enrich their after-class activities. He also pointed out that it is useful to improve the relationship between teachers and students and to create a warm and harmonious atmosphere in schools and families.,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,Last week, I had an interview with Professor Yang about the middle school students addiction to the Internet. According to Professor Yang, the number of the netizens in our country has incresaed to 338 million, and 25% of them are middle school students, most of whom are playing computer games while surfing the Internet. Internet addiction will certainly cause them lack of sleep and will have a bad influence on their health and studies.,輕松背誦！(Round 2),愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,He suggested that schools should try not only to reduce students heavy burden and relieve their stress, but also enrich their after-class activities. He also pointed out that it is useful to improve the relationship between teachers and students and to create a warm and harmonious atmosphere in schools and families.,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,Last week, I had an interview with Professor Yang about the middle school students addiction to the Internet. According to Professor Yang, the number of the netizens in our country has incresaed to 338 million, and 25% of them are middle school students, most of whom are playing computer games while surfing the Internet. Internet addiction will certainly cause them lack of sleep and will have a bad influence on their health and studies.,輕松背誦！(Round 3),愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,He suggested that schools should try not only to reduce students heavy burden and relieve their stress, but also enrich their after-class activities. He also pointed out that it is useful to improve the relationship between teachers and students and to create a warm and harmonious atmosphere in schools and families.,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,4、如何實(shí)踐運(yùn)用 1）詞組的運(yùn)用 關(guān)鍵：分類整理。 舉例說明：表示喜歡的詞組（不同程度的） like / love be in favour of be keen on / crazy about / fond of have a preference / taste for prefer to delight in sth. / doing sth. feel like doing sth.,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,2）句型臨摹萬能句型的使用 例1：天氣因素是關(guān)鍵。 Weather is the most important thing. Weather is the key point. It is weather that counts. / makes a difference. 實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練： 要獲得成功，自制力是關(guān)鍵。 To gain success, it is self-control that counts. / makes a difference.,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,例2：我們唯有相信她才能解決這件事情。 We have to believe her, and then we can solve the problem. The only thing we can do is to believe her, which can help solve the problem. Only if we believe her, can we solve the problem. 實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練： 我們只有做到這些，才可以解決空氣污染的問題。 Only if we do these can we solve the problems of air pollution.,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,Only if we follow the rules, can we work it out smoothly. Only if we start out small, can we have a better life. Only when we do all mentioned above, can we make a success. Only in this way, can we succeed. Only in these ways, can we build up a harmonious society.,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,Teamwork spirit contributes a lot to our success. Whatever you decide to do, just do the best you can. There are three factors contributing to my point. There is an old saying that. There are many reasons accounting for this change Opinions are divided on the felling of happiness. This story reminds me of one of my former experiences.,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,3）例文臨摹 （以“調(diào)查（偶像）”為例）,調(diào)查的時(shí)間、問題、對(duì)象 Last week , we did a survey among 2600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”. 調(diào)查結(jié)果 The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figure” is the same as that of the girls. 個(gè)人觀點(diǎn) As for myself, Thomas Edison is my idol, because his invention have greatly changed our life.,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,最近，我們以“2012年中學(xué)生的春節(jié)活動(dòng)”為題，在368名中學(xué)生中進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查(survey)。 【寫作內(nèi)容】 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容用英語寫 一份調(diào)查報(bào)告。 內(nèi)容包括： 1.調(diào)查問題及調(diào)查對(duì)象； 2.主要活動(dòng)； 3.感受及原因； 4.期望。,實(shí)戰(zhàn)訓(xùn)練（2012年廣州一模基礎(chǔ)寫作）,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,Recently, we _ 368 students _ how they spent _ (2012年的春節(jié)). _, _ (留在家里) to do homework _, _(高達(dá)) 45%. _ (與此同時(shí)), _ spent most of their time with their parents visiting relatives and friends while _(25%的學(xué)生) went traveling with classmates or parents.,did a survey among,on,As the data shows,ranks the first,30% of the students,the 2012 Spring Festival,staying at home,up to,In the meantime,one fourth,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,_(當(dāng)被問到) how they felt about the Spring Festival, most said they enjoyed it _(因?yàn)? the colourful holiday and the _(大量的) lucky money they got, but some felt unhappy _(因?yàn)?的原因) _(.的量) homework left little time for fun activities. _(至于.方面) the expectation, many students _(表達(dá)他們的希望) that next year they will have less homework and more free time.,When asked,enormous,As to,for the reason that,because of,the amount of,expressed the hope,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,強(qiáng)調(diào)提醒,不能盲目套句型，要自然、流暢為先。 注意there be句型的使用 觀點(diǎn)要鮮明，例子要符合完整的邏輯,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,建 議,一個(gè)“善于” 兩個(gè)“重視” 三個(gè)“主動(dòng)”,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,愛學(xué)網(wǎng)資料,