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1、學案八吸引眼球的高級詞匯與學案八吸引眼球的高級詞匯與復雜句式及演講復雜句式及演講/致辭致辭寫作時，如果僅局限在把內(nèi)容交代清楚這一層次，只選用一些普通的詞，或一律使用簡單句平鋪直敘，那么習作就會顯得呆板、單調(diào)，沒有可讀性。要想寫出高分作文，不僅要把要求表述清楚，而且還要嘗試使用高級詞匯與復雜句式。如能運用恰當，哪怕只用上一、兩處，也會為習作增添色彩，給閱卷老師留下深刻的印象。寫作運用探究1.標新立異恰當?shù)厥褂靡恍┨N含感情色彩或其他考生不容易想到的高級詞匯，會彰顯自己的水平。高考佳句Ill thank you if you think about my suggestion.Ill appreci

2、ate it if you take my suggestion into consideration. (福建高考滿分作文)一、運用高級詞匯三原則I received your email last week，but I am busy preparing for my final exam，which is important for me，so I didnt reply to you without delay.I received your email last week，but I am busy preparing for my final exam，which is vital

3、 for me，so I didnt reply to you without delay.(山東高考滿分作文)As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.(遼寧高考標準范文)Well try our best to improve the working conditions.Well spare no effort to promote the working conditions.(山東高考標準范文) 2.短語優(yōu)先寫作中，要想寫出“亮點”就要注意挖掘自己現(xiàn)存的詞匯潛力，多使用詞組、習語來代替

4、一些單詞，會使短文內(nèi)容豐富，表達更有力度，增添文采。高考佳句To achieve ones dream，one must try to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach.To achieve ones dream，one must make great efforts to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach.(北京高考滿分作文)Whats more，we can pour out the troubles we

5、face，and release our pressure from different aspects.Whats more，we can pour out the troubles we are faced with，and release our pressure from different aspects.(重慶高考滿分作文)To tell you the truth，I dont really like your new novel.To tell you the truth，I really show no interest in your new novel.(湖南高考滿分作文

6、)3.手法多樣在表達相同或相近的意思時，要盡量避免過多地使用同一個單詞，用其他相應的詞或短語來代替，這樣能讓閱卷老師感覺到你詞匯量豐富。實在找不到，可以變更說法，“曲徑通幽”或許會有更好的效果。高考佳句I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches.I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. (江西高考滿分作文)It showed me that the way of education in Canada is quite d

7、ifferent from the way of education of China.It showed me that the way of education in Canada is quite different from that of China.(湖北高考滿分作文) 【即時演練】用較高級詞匯代替黑體的單詞或短語1.We all have the same opportunity.2.More and more visitors have been attracted to this place.3.The teacher directed the gifted students

8、 towards the more difficult courses.4.Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.5.I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us.6.Would you please help me to turn down the radio?答案1.possess2.An increasing number of3.challenging4.promote5.put up with6.do me a favor 二、運用高級句式的七大

9、策略1.運用被動語態(tài)，重點更鮮明高考佳句We will have selected about thirty volunteers to the Mars throughout the world by 2015.About thirty volunteers will have been selected to the Mars throughout the world by 2015.(廣東高考書面表達)Im delighted to know that the Shanghai Museum will organize a famous art exhibition and you ar

10、e collecting opinions of the public as to selecting the location for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.Im delighted to know that a famous art exhibition will be organized by the Shanghai Museum and opinions of the public are being collected as to selecting the location

11、for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.(上海高考滿分作文)2.運用強調(diào)句，重點更突出高考佳句His great efforts helped me out of the trouble.It was his great efforts that helped me out of the trouble.(安徽高考滿分作文)Without hesitation，I decided to follow them and we had lots of fun that day.Without hesit

12、ation，I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day.(2015浙江，標準范文)Our parents have devoted their unconditional love to us，which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward.Its our parents who have devoted their unconditional love to us，which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward

13、.(重慶高考滿分作文) 3.運用倒裝句，語言更活潑高考佳句Books are not only shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.Not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.(2015重慶，標準范文)I was so excited that I co

14、uldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.(2014福建，滿分作文)The children can grow up mentally and physically healthy only in this way.Only in this way can the children grow up mentally and physically healthy.(福建高考滿分作文)4.運用省略句，行文更簡潔高考佳句Maybe it

15、 is a better idea to take outdoor activities when you feel bad.Maybe it is a better idea to take outdoor activities when feeling bad.(2014安徽，滿分作文)Are you looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony? Sure! Itll be held from 15：00 to 17：00.Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony? Sure! Itll be h

16、eld from 15：00 to 17：00.(2014遼寧，滿分作文)As it is scheduled，English Talent Show will be held today.As scheduled，English Talent Show will be held today.(2014陜西，滿分作文)Although they were faced with many problems，they didnt lose heart.Although faced with many problems，they didnt lose heart.(山東高考滿分作文)5.運用感嘆句，

17、感情更強烈高考佳句From the expression on the face，I knew my math teacher was surprised.What a surprised expression was on my math teachers face！(2015湖南，滿分作文)It is a very splendid moment.How splendid a moment it is！(遼寧高考滿分作文)6.運用with復合結(jié)構(gòu)、分詞(短語)等，結(jié)構(gòu)更簡明高考佳句Our school lies at the foot of a mountain，there is a ri

18、ver flowing in front of it.At the foot of a mountain lies our school，with a river flowing in front of it.(北京高考滿分作文)The teacher came into the lecture hall，many students followed him.The teacher came into the lecture hall，followed by many students.(廣東高考滿分作文)I picked up the case.I shouted at the man lo

19、udly.But he didnt hear me and rode away.After picking up the case，I shouted at the man loudly，but he rode too fast to hear me.(湖南高考滿分作文) 7.運用虛擬語氣，表達更傳神高考佳句I missed being hit by the car with your help.Without your help，I would have been hit by the car.(安徽高考滿分作文)It is high time for both local governme

20、nt and residents to take effective measures.It is high time that both local government and residents took effective measures.(福建高考滿分作文)8.運用復合句，句式更多變高考佳句To our surprise，the little girl knows so many things.What surprised us most is that the little girl knows so many things.(重慶高考滿分作文)It was quite an e

21、xperience for both of us，and I will never forget it for the rest of my life.It was quite an experience for both of us，which Ill never forget for the rest of my life.(陜西高考滿分作文)9.運用it句式，表達更豐富高考佳句Personally，drinking plenty of boiled water every day is necessary.I think it necessary that we should drink

22、 plenty of boiled water every day.(陜西高考滿分作文)我認為我們每天喝大量的開水是必要的。Whats worse，some drivers，cyclists and pedestrians do not think obeying traffic rules is vital.Whats worse，some drivers，cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.(2015江蘇，滿分作文)更糟糕的是，一些司機，騎自行車者和行人沒有認識到交通規(guī)則的重要性。You

23、should provide some money to fund our program，as well as offer us some practical suggestions.Thats our desire.Its our desire that you should provide some money to fund our program，as well as offer us some practical suggestions.(重慶高考滿分作文)我們渴望你能為我們的項目提供一些資金，還能提供一些實用的建議?！炯磿r演練】按要求轉(zhuǎn)換下列句子7.Above all，we mu

24、st do something to stop pollution.(用被動語態(tài))_8.I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.(用強調(diào)句)_9.We dont know its value until we lose health.(用倒裝句)_10.If it isnt well organized，the meeting will be a failure.(用省略句)_11.We had a very good time with the peasants that day.(用感嘆句

25、)_12.Because there was too much noise，I couldnt go on studying.(用with復合結(jié)構(gòu))_答案7.Above all，something must be done to stop pollution.8.It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of English.9.Not until we lose health do we know its value.10.If not well organized，the meeting

26、will be a failure.11.What a good time we had with the peasants that day!12.With the noise going on，I couldnt go on studying.請用高級詞匯替換下列句子中的畫線部分1.He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.2.Developing very quickly，the Internet causes the breakdown of face-to-face communication.3.When you are bor

27、ed with the people sometimes，youd better find a quiet place，listening to some classical music.4.He didnt listen to what I said in the class.單句跟蹤演練5.Suddenly I thought of an idea that someone had broken into my house.6.As soon as he arrived，he began his research.答案1.determined/made up his mind2.gives

28、 rise to 3.fed up with4.turned a deaf ear to5.I came up with an idea/an idea occurred to me6.On/Upon his arrival .按要求轉(zhuǎn)換下列句子1.I didnt take his advice，so I failed in the exam.(用虛擬語氣)_2.If it is so，I hope you will have a wonderful time.(用省略句)_3.We can achieve our goal in this way.(用倒裝句)_4.Much to our s

29、urprise，Mary failed in the final exam.(用名詞性從句)_5.Because the weather was good，our journey was comfortable.(用短語代替從句)_6.If you go through the gate，youll find the entrance to Bear Country.(用并列句)_答案1.If I had taken his advice，I wouldnt have failed in the exam.2.If so，I hope you will have a wonderful tim

30、e.3.Only in this way can we achieve our goal.4.What surprised us most is that Mary failed in the final exam.5.Thanks to the good weather，our journey was comfortable.6.Go through the gate，and youll find the entrance to Bear Country. .根據(jù)漢語提示完成句子1._ if you could teach me how to use the computer.(陜西高考滿分

31、作文)如果你能教我如何用電腦，我將不勝感激。2._ I wont believe him. (安徽高考滿分作文)無論他說什么，我都不會相信他了。3._，we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruits，sharing our stories.(遼寧高考滿分作文)美麗的月亮高掛在天空，我們坐在一起吃著月餅和水果，一塊分享我們的故事。4._ about his condition. (湖北高考滿分作文) 我是多么擔心他的境況呀！ 5._，they didnt lose heart.(江蘇高考滿分作文)雖然面對那么多的問題，他們并沒有灰心喪氣。6._ wor

32、ds could be powerful in both positive and negative ways.(湖北高考標準范文)直到那時我才意識到話語在積極和消極這兩種方式上是很有力量的。7.From this experience，I realized that _.(2014新課標全國，滿分作文)從這次經(jīng)歷，我意識到是熱情導致了我的成功。8._ to solve the problem as soon as possible.應當盡快采取措施來解決這個問題。(廣東高考標準范文) 答案1.Id appreciate it2.Whatever/No matter what he says3

33、.With the beautiful moon up in the sky 4.How worried I am5.Although/Though faced with so many problems6.Not until then did I realize7.it was enthusiasm that led to my success8.Effective measures should be taken 演講/致辭常用詞匯1._ n.機會2._ v.呼吁3._ v.促進4._ n.榮幸5._ together聚會6.keep sb _陪伴某人7._ behalf of 代表8._

34、 up 歡呼答案1.opportunity/chance2.appeal3.promote pany7.on8.cheer 1.歡迎辭常用語：(1)We are glad to have a chance to get together with.(2)We feel greatly honoured to have a chance to be with.(3)Lets give our warm welcome to.(4)Thank you for your accepting our invitation to come to.(5)First of all，allow me on b

35、ehalf of sb to do sth(6)Now let us ask sb to speak to us.演講/致辭常用句式2.歡送辭常用語：(1)In bidding farewell to sb.(2)To convey our profound friendship to sb.(3)To convey our best regards and respects to sb.(4)To wish sb a pleasant journey home and good health.(5)May the friendship between.be further developed

36、!演講稿是演講者在一定的場合，面對特定的對象，為了達到某種目的而采取的表達自己觀點的文字，是高考中較為常見的應用文。演講/致辭常用寫作方法技巧與注意事項 主要內(nèi)容一般說來，演講稿包括歡迎(送)性和宣讀性兩種類型。前者屬于在正式場合接待或歡送客人時，主人為了表達歡迎、感謝或祝愿而進行的熱情友好的發(fā)言。此類發(fā)言稿通常包含禮節(jié)性語言和有關的人物或事情(如旅游路線、學校概況等)的情況介紹兩部分內(nèi)容。后者屬于向聽眾講述一些道理，其目的在于希望對方接受自己的見解。此類發(fā)言稿通常綜合了說明、議論、敘述等寫作手法。演講稿是介紹性說明文，在語言使用上一定要準確簡明、通俗易懂、層次清楚、條理分明。在寫作時，應注意

37、用詞得體，符合場合和語境。寫作技巧1.文章結(jié)構(gòu)：演講稿第一段側(cè)重介紹事情的發(fā)生、發(fā)展和結(jié)局。第二段應緊扣主題表示歡迎、歡送、號召、建議、個人看法等。2.語言直白簡潔。演講稿是直接面向聽眾的，所以我們在語言的選擇上要簡短，盡可能多使用簡單句，聽眾一聽就能聽懂，當然，一些經(jīng)典的長句我們也可以用在文中。3.觀點鮮明，感情真摯。演講稿觀點鮮明，顯示著說話者對一種理性認識的肯定，也顯示著說話者對客觀事物見解的透徹程度，能給人以可信性和可靠感，感情真摯才能打動人，引起聽眾的共鳴。假設你正在參加全省中學生英語演講比賽，請你針對有些父母經(jīng)常翻看孩子日記或書包這一現(xiàn)象，寫一篇演講稿，陳述你的觀點。認為同學們不必

38、為此苦惱；希望能夠體諒父母的苦衷；建議與父母進行交流和溝通。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)?！灸M訓練】Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，_Thank you!【參考范文】Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，Some of us are having problems with our parents，as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries.I fully understand w

39、hy we are not comfortable about it，but theres no need to feel too sad.Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure were not getting into any trouble.They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same.Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is：Tell them we want them to trust us as much as wed like to trust them.If you dont think you can talk to them，write them a letter and leave it lying aroundthey are bound to read it.Thank you！