山東省2020年中考英語(yǔ)真題分類匯編 專題08 書(shū)面表達(dá)（含解析）

專題八 書(shū)面表達(dá)目錄一、山東濱州二、山東青島三、山東日照四、山東聊城五、山東濟(jì)寧六、山東泰安七、山東濰坊八、山東東營(yíng)九、山東菏澤十、山東臨沂十一、山東煙臺(tái)十二、山東威海十三、山東德州十四、山東棗莊一、 山東濱州九、書(shū)面表達(dá)71.即將畢業(yè)，請(qǐng)以“My favorite teacher”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，短文包括以下內(nèi)容：1. 老師的外貌、性格、所教科目等；2. 以事例描述喜愛(ài)的原因；3. 表達(dá)對(duì)這位老師的感激和祝福。要求：1. 要點(diǎn)齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名與校名；3. 卷面整潔，書(shū)寫(xiě)美觀，課適當(dāng)加2-3分；4. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右，開(kāi)頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。My favorite teacherIts time to graduate from junior high school. Id like to write something about my favorite teacher. _【答案】例文My favorite teacherIts time to graduate from junior high school. Id like to write something about my favorite teacher. Of all the teachers, I like my English teacher best. She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and reading. She is of medium height and has long straight hair. When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in the English competition. She encouraged me not to give up any chance to show myself to others. Thanks to her, I changed my attitude and won the first prize.I will never forget the wonderful time we were together. Best wishes to her!【解析】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如graduate from，of all the teachers，of medium height，so that，be afraid to do，take part in，give up，encourage sb. to do，at the weekends，thanks to sb.，the first prize等。而并列結(jié)構(gòu)She is of medium height and has long straight hair./ I changed my attitude and won the first prize.和She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and reading./ When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in the English competition./ I will never forget the wonderful time we were together.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。二、 山東青島61.人生中有很多第一次：第一次學(xué)游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家務(wù)；第一次贏得比賽；第一次。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，就你的第一次寫(xiě)一篇短文。 內(nèi)容包括：1. 第一次的整個(gè)過(guò)程；2. 你的感受。 要求：1. 詞數(shù)：80 100（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time 【答案】The first time to learn to swimAs we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time to learn to swim. Last summer vacation, my father took me to the swimming pool in our neighborhood and taught me to swim. It was the first for me to swim. At first, I could not swim at all. My father was very patient. He encouraged me and taught me how to swim. He taught me how to breathe in the water first. Then, He threw me into the deepest part of the swimming pool, I was so frightened that I couldnt move. But I never gave up, I felt safe with my dad around. Three hours later, with the help of my father, I could swim by myself. Although I couldn't swim very well, I was very happy.I will never forget this experience, because I not only learned how to swim, but also learned to be brave!【解析】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示信息，選擇給你印象深刻的第一次活動(dòng)進(jìn)行描述并談?wù)勛约旱母惺?。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱主要為第一、三人稱。寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文。首先開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，介紹自己的第一次活動(dòng)是什么，接下來(lái)詳細(xì)介紹第一次活動(dòng)的整個(gè)過(guò)程，最后談一談自己的感受。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。注意： 注意緊扣主題，意思連貫，語(yǔ)言通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，避免出現(xiàn)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤；詞數(shù)在80100。三、 山東日照66.寫(xiě)作假如你是李華，你的外國(guó)朋友Jack計(jì)劃今年暑假來(lái)日照旅游度假。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，給他寫(xiě)一封信。1.介紹日照地理位置、氣候環(huán)境等；2.向他推薦一至兩處景點(diǎn)；3.詢問(wèn)具體計(jì)劃，以便做好準(zhǔn)備。要求：1.根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，不要逐字翻譯；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；3.詞數(shù)90左右。Dear Jack, Im glad to learn that you are coming to Rizhao for your summer vacation. _ _Yours, Lihua【答案】Dear Jack,Im glad to learn that you are coming to Rizhao for your summer vacation. Sunshine in southeastern Shandong Province, China, its temperature is neither too high nor too low. Rizhao Wulian Mountain Scenic Area is a combination of Wulian Mountain and Jiuxian Mountain. Rizhao Seashore National Forest Park is a rare natural seashore bathing ground in northern China. Do you have any good plans? Give me a call before you come. I'll show you these beautiful sceneries.Yours, Lihua【解析】假如你是李華，你的外國(guó)朋友Jack計(jì)劃今年暑假來(lái)日照旅游度假。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，給他寫(xiě)一封信。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開(kāi)頭。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě)，要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。四、 山東聊城六、書(shū)面表達(dá)46.假如你叫陳偉, 2019年6月22日和23日是你中考后的第一個(gè)周末, 請(qǐng)你制定一個(gè)周末活動(dòng)計(jì)劃, 并用英語(yǔ)給你的英國(guó)筆友Alan寫(xiě)一封電子郵件, 說(shuō)明你的活動(dòng)安排。主要活動(dòng)內(nèi)容包括: 1. 6月22日上午在家讀書(shū); 下午與家人和朋友外出活動(dòng)。2. 6月23日到朋友家附近的公園撿垃圾。3. 你對(duì)本次活動(dòng)的期待。注意: 1. 郵件字?jǐn)?shù): 80詞左右。2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫, 但郵件中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名。3. 郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給擊, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Alan, I'm going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend. _Yours, Chen Wei【答案】Dear Alan， I'm going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend. On the morning of 22nd June, I'm going to get up a little late and then read an interesting storybook. In the afternoon I'm going out with my family and friends. We're going to take a walk in the country near our home or go swimming in the lake. And on 23rd June we're going to collect liter in the park near my friend's house. I think it's going to be a great weekend-busy but good fun! Yours, Chen Wei【解析】寫(xiě)作要求以電子郵件的形式介紹自己中考后的第一個(gè)周末活動(dòng)計(jì)劃。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點(diǎn)：分別從時(shí)間和活動(dòng)安排來(lái)介紹，根據(jù)表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，會(huì)用到be going to結(jié)構(gòu)，人稱為第一人稱。在時(shí)間的表達(dá)上注意介詞的正確使用，在某一天的早晨、下午、晚上用介詞on。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，還需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。五、 山東濟(jì)寧八.寫(xiě)作46.假如你是Wang Hong, 你的美國(guó)筆友Kevin下學(xué)期將作為名交換生來(lái)你們學(xué)校。下面是他發(fā)給你的一封e-mail.請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容給予恰當(dāng)?shù)幕貜?fù)。注意:1.文中不得出現(xiàn)可能透露考生真實(shí)身份的任何信息.2.100詞左右(開(kāi)頭,結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù))。Wang HongMy Questions Dear Wang Hong,How are you doing?You might not believe it, but Im going to your school as one of five exchange students next term. And Im so excited! However, Im worried about communicating with the teachers and students. As you know, I can speak only a little Chinese. What should I do? Besides, I want to learn to play pin-pong. Can you find a good player to help me? If you can, tell me something about him or her.Looking forward to your reply Bets wishes! Yours,Kevin 參考詞語(yǔ)talk in English, help sb. with, be friendly and helpful, practice. with, play well, win a good prize. 【答案】Dear Kevin Im glad to hear from you.You said you were worried about communicating with the teachers and students because you could speak only a little Chinese.You dont be worried about it.You can talk with them in English.They can also help you with Chinese.They are very friendly and helpful.You also said you wanted to learn to play ping-pong.You can practice it with Li Lei.He is my best friend.He plays it very well.He won a good prize last week.He is ready to do others.With his help,you will be good at it.Welcome to our school.Best wishes.YoursWang Hong【解析】這是一篇圖表，要求介紹自己。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料注意不同的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。六、 山東泰安第三節(jié) 寫(xiě)作52.習(xí)近平總書(shū)記在全國(guó)教育大會(huì)上提出了“立德樹(shù)人”的人才培養(yǎng)根本任務(wù)，作為初中畢業(yè)生，你有什么人生規(guī)劃？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。. 提示： 1. 作為中國(guó)人而自豪：過(guò)去，我國(guó)優(yōu)秀的傳統(tǒng)文化影響了世界：今天，祖國(guó)在全國(guó)人民的努力下越來(lái)越強(qiáng)大，許多科技世界領(lǐng)先； 2. 為實(shí)現(xiàn)“中國(guó)夢(mèng)”而奮斗：學(xué)會(huì)做一個(gè)懂感恩、守規(guī)矩、善良誠(chéng)信的人；不畏難，努力學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)、提高能力，將來(lái)成為一名 要求：語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，可根據(jù)提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯；演講中不得提及生個(gè)人身份的相關(guān)信息，如人名、校名或地名等；詞數(shù)80100，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。Hello, everyone!_That's all. Thank you!【答案】Hello, everyone! As a Chinese, I am so proud of it. In the past, our great traditional culture made a difference to the world, such as sailing, communicating and so on. Nowadays, our country is becoming stronger and stronger by working hard of all Chinese. A lot of science and technology lead the world, such as high speed, Change 4 and Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macau Bridge and so on.As a teenager, we should do as follows to achieve our Chinese dream. First of all, we are supposed to thank all the people who devote themselves to making our country wonderful. Whats more, we need follow the rules. In school we should obey the school rules. Only by doing these dimple things can we become a person that the country needs. In addition, wed better not lie and be a honest man in order that all people can trust us. Last but not least, we should try our best to work hard and when face difficulties, we never give up. I am going to be a scientists. If I am a scientist, I will do more researches and let other countries admire us.That's all. Thank you!【解析】本文屬于材料作文，談?wù)撟鎳?guó)的偉大強(qiáng)盛以及為實(shí)現(xiàn)中國(guó)夢(mèng)我們應(yīng)該做的努力。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be proud of, make a difference to, such as, and so on, 比較級(jí)and比較級(jí), devote oneself to doing, in order that, try ones best以及first of all, whats more, in addition和last but not least等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。七、 山東濰坊五、寫(xiě)作46.請(qǐng)根據(jù)上文內(nèi)容和下列問(wèn)題提示進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之失構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。注意： 1.續(xù)寫(xiě)故事的詞數(shù)為80左右； 2. 展開(kāi)合理想象，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫； 3. 可根據(jù)需要自主選用以下參考詞匯： Call the police dangerous escape catch robber (強(qiáng)盜) 【答案】例文“A knife ! My God ! He was really dangerous .It was wise to drive him off my car .” Andrea thought .Then she breathed deeply and called the police to tell them what had happened .A moment later , the police came to her .Andrea pointed to the direction the “old lady” might be in .Then the police drove along the road to look for “her” . How amazing ! The police were surprised to see that the “old lady” was still standing by the road .The police stopped and said , “Hello ,madam .Wed like to take you to Brockboune ,Get in ,please .” B“How dangerous ! What should I do ? ” Andrea said to herself ,”He must be a thief or robber .” As soon as she realized this , Andrea drove to the nearest police station and told the police what had happened ,then she left .When Andrea got home ,she told her parents all about the “old lady” . After hearing the story ,her parents hugged her tightly and said ,”What a lucky girl ! You are brave and smart enough to protect yourself .We are proud of you !” An hour later ,the police phoned her that they had caught the man-a real robber .【解析】這是一篇根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容和圖表提示，要求續(xù)寫(xiě)一個(gè)完整的故事。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第三人稱，一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：as soon as一就，call the police報(bào)警，be proud of為感到驕傲八、 山東東營(yíng)八、書(shū)面表達(dá)66.Sunday Mail 青少年專欄開(kāi)展“對(duì)身邊的人說(shuō)一句話”主題征文活動(dòng)，這句話或許是對(duì)父 母的一句“我愛(ài)你”，或許是對(duì)老師、同學(xué)的一句 “謝謝你”，或許是對(duì)身邊人的一句“對(duì)不起”等。請(qǐng)將“I want to say_”補(bǔ)充完整，并以此為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，如：I want to say thank you 等。談?wù)勀阆胝f(shuō)那句話的原因以及發(fā)生在那句話背后的故事，并說(shuō)說(shuō)你的感受。要求：1. 認(rèn)真審題，把握要點(diǎn)；2. 行文連貫，條理清晰，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)學(xué)校、姓名等信息；3. 100 詞左右。【答案】I want to say thank youI want to say thank you to my dear mother. She not only cares about my life, but always helps me out.Once I argued with my best friend Lucy, because she always pointed out my shortcomings. My mother talked with me and advised me to think about her words. I did so and found what Lucy said was helpful to me. With my mothers help, I didnt lose my best friend and learned how to deal with problems with friends.She does all that she can do for me. No matter what will happen in the future, I will love her forever.【解析】本文屬于話題作文，對(duì)身邊的人說(shuō)一句話，并談?wù)勀阆胝f(shuō)那句話的原因以及發(fā)生在那句話背后的故事，并說(shuō)說(shuō)你的感受。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如not only.but, care about, help sb out, argue with, point out, talk with, advise sb to do, think about, be helpful to, with ones help, deal with以及in the future等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。九、 山東菏澤第二節(jié) 書(shū)面表達(dá)56.假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Lisa來(lái)信說(shuō)她最近正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)，在學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中遇到"程門立雪"（ Cheng Men Li Xue）這一成語(yǔ)，不解其意，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面圖片提示，用英語(yǔ)給她回信，簡(jiǎn)要敘述這個(gè)成語(yǔ)故事，并談?wù)勛约旱睦斫夂透形颉Ｒ螅?語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)句通順，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2字?jǐn)?shù)：100詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)?？赡苡玫降脑~： idiom成語(yǔ)； during the Northern Song Dynasty北宋時(shí)期；Cheng Yi程顧； have a nap小憩； disturb打擾； moved感動(dòng)的； respect尊敬Dear Lisa, I'm glad to hear from you_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Lisa,I'm glad to hear from you. I am very happy that you have great interest in learning Chinese. Let me tell you the story about the idiom Cheng Men Li Xue.It is a story during the Northern Song Dynasty. There was a student called Yangshi. He had a confused problem. He wanted to ask famous teacher Cheng Yi. When he arrived his house, the teacher was having a nap. So the page boy asked Yangshi to visit the teacher another time. But Yangshi refused. Suddenly it started snowing. The page boy asked him to come in and wait in the house since it was very cold. However, Yangshi stood in front of the gate. Even later it snowed heavily. After the teacher finished all the things, Yangshi still stood in the snow. Then the teacher asked him, “Why not come another day? How silly you are!”. Yangshi said, “I have learned something from you, I can't disturb you, and I must show my respect for you”. Finally, Cheng Yi was moved by Yangshi's action and taught him a lot. It shows us that we should show our respect to our teachers. Hope it will help you to understand. Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇看圖作文，要求我們根據(jù)圖示給自己的英國(guó)筆友Lisa寫(xiě)信，給她解釋“程門立雪”這個(gè)成語(yǔ)的含義。寫(xiě)作前，應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察圖片，弄清楚圖片中發(fā)生的事情，然后用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。審題可知，這篇文章的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：首先引入Lisa學(xué)習(xí)中遇到的問(wèn)題，點(diǎn)明寫(xiě)這封信的目的；然后重點(diǎn)是解釋該成語(yǔ)的含義，根據(jù)圖片提示進(jìn)行表達(dá)；最后談一談自己對(duì)這個(gè)成語(yǔ)的理解和感悟。短文中開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾部分應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)；主體部分用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的變化。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先應(yīng)將題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容都包括在內(nèi)，包括題目中給出的提示詞，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)用上。注意分清結(jié)構(gòu)和層次，敘述應(yīng)清晰、有條理。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)問(wèn)題，在詞序以及表達(dá)上英語(yǔ)與漢語(yǔ)有很多不同的地方，不能根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從整句話的結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，選擇適當(dāng)?shù)木湫?、詞匯和短語(yǔ)進(jìn)行表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句以及復(fù)合句，為提升作文檔次，可使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使上下文意連貫，表達(dá)自然、流暢。十、 山東臨沂61.書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)光荏苒，初中三年轉(zhuǎn)瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比較，你會(huì)有很多變化。請(qǐng)以“I have changed a lot!”為題，根據(jù)以下要求與提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，具體描述你最重要的變化及其如何發(fā)生的。要求：l. 短文不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分；2.不少于60詞。提示：l. What did you use to be like?2. What is the most important change?3. And how did it happen? Tell a story about it.I have changed a lot!_【答案】Great changes have happened to me during the past three years. The most important change is my attitude to English.I used to be tired of learning English. And I was not interested in it. I couldnt remember the words freely or pronounce them correctly. Thanks to my mother, she often encourages me to learn it. Besides, with the help of my English teacher, I find a better way to learn English. I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject. Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am!【解析】本文要寫(xiě)我初中三年的變化，根據(jù)習(xí)作提示，首先要指出我最大的變化是什么，并描述出具體變化是怎么發(fā)生的，所以要針對(duì)自己某一個(gè)最大的變化來(lái)寫(xiě)，而不是泛泛地寫(xiě)很多變化；時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。本篇文章，首先開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，我有很多變化，我最大的變化是我對(duì)待英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度的變化。第二段是文章的主體，先描述過(guò)去學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的狀況，其中用到表達(dá)過(guò)去常用的句型used to do ;在媽媽及老師的幫助下，我的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)生了很大變化，具體表現(xiàn)為 I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.等。最后對(duì)以上變化進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并指出對(duì)于這個(gè)變化，我的心情如何，Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am! 整篇文章內(nèi)容符合要求，時(shí)態(tài)用云正確，思路清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。十一、 山東煙臺(tái)第二節(jié) 寫(xiě)作56.假設(shè)你某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社的編輯Rina, 收到Li Wei 同學(xué)的來(lái)信，訴說(shuō)了因?yàn)榉逝殖Ｔ獾酵瑢W(xué)嘲笑的苦惱，并向你尋求建議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給Li Wei 回信。要求：1.須包括所有要點(diǎn)提示并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充,語(yǔ)句通順,意思連貫;2.詞數(shù):100詞左右;開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);3.文中不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)入真實(shí)姓名和校名。參考詞匯:laugh at; care about; high- fat food; the more, the healthierDear Li Wei,Ive received your letter and I can understand you. YoursRina【答案】ear Li Wei,I have received your letter and I can understand you. You must feel bad when being laughed at use of your over-weight. Here is my advice for you.Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident, as it will help you have courage to face and overcome your trouble.Secondly, try to eat healthily keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight.Thirdly, I strongly advise you to exercise more often. You'd better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. The more you exercise, the healthier you'll be.I hope my advice will be helpful to you.Yours,Rina【解析】假設(shè)你某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社的編輯Rina, 收到Li Wei 同學(xué)的來(lái)信，訴說(shuō)了因?yàn)榉逝殖Ｔ獾酵瑢W(xué)嘲笑的苦惱，并向你尋求建議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給Li Wei 回信。本題給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，寫(xiě)作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。這是一篇很好的文章，文中用到了一些好的句型：Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you.；Secondly, try