高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí) 第二篇 閱讀技能探究 專題六 書面表達(dá) 第2講 敘議結(jié)合類課件.ppt

第2講 敘議結(jié)合類,【典例】(2013浙江高考) 請(qǐng)以“One Thing Im Proud of”為題, 用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100-120個(gè)詞的短文, 記述一件你自己認(rèn)為得意的事情。 1. 記敘事情經(jīng)過; 2. 簡(jiǎn)要說明你感到得意的原因或從中得到的啟示。 注意: 文章的標(biāo)題已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù))。,One Thing Im Proud of _ _,【解題思路】 第一步: 依體裁謀篇章 結(jié)構(gòu)對(duì) 第一關(guān) 這是一篇敘議結(jié)合類文章, 短文的三部分應(yīng)為: 第一段介紹一件自己認(rèn)為得意的事情; 第二段記敘事情的經(jīng)過; 第三段說明你感到得意的原因或從中得到的啟示。,第二步: 列要點(diǎn)選句式 要點(diǎn)全 及格線 要點(diǎn)一: 我仍然記得我是如何變成一名好乒乓球運(yùn)動(dòng)員的。 _ 要點(diǎn)二: 我去高中學(xué)校的第一天, 我看到我的一些同學(xué)正在打乒乓球。 _ _ 要點(diǎn)三: 我真的對(duì)這次經(jīng)歷非常驕傲。 _,I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.,The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing,table tennis.,Im really proud of this experience.,第三步: 扣主題拓展句 句式美 優(yōu)秀分 要點(diǎn)二拓展: 我去高中學(xué)校的第一天, 我看到我的一些同學(xué)正在打乒乓 球。(添加事情的發(fā)展、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果) _ _ _ _ _ _,The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing,table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be,just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their,techniques. Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to,challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the,best players in my class.,要點(diǎn)三拓展: 我真的對(duì)這次經(jīng)歷非常驕傲。(添加驕傲的原因) _ _ _ _,Im really proud of this experience because it helps me realize that we,can all fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work.,It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes,perfect. ”,【現(xiàn)場(chǎng)閱卷作文升格】 學(xué) 生 答 卷,我 來 閱 卷 該生習(xí)作為四檔作文, 得分為19分。能覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn); 詞匯表達(dá)較為熟練, 高級(jí)詞匯使用不是很多; 作者句法不錯(cuò), 大部分句子都正確, 個(gè)別地方出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤。 1. 第二句中的lasts改為lasting, 謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤, 這句話中is是謂語(yǔ), last應(yīng)用非謂語(yǔ)形式。 2. 第三句中的worked后添加as, 搭配錯(cuò)誤, work as(擔(dān)任)。 3. 第五句中的readed應(yīng)改為read, 動(dòng)詞形式錯(cuò)誤, read的過去式為read。 4. 最后一句中benefical應(yīng)改為beneficial, 單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤。,五 檔 作 文 One Thing Im Proud of I still remember how I became a good table tennis player. The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.,Im really proud of this experience because it helps me realize that we can all fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect. ”,一、敘議結(jié)合類作文“三段式”解題技巧 1. 如果是描述個(gè)人經(jīng)歷, 需要簡(jiǎn)明扼要地?cái)⑹鍪虑榍榫? 如果是諺語(yǔ)/引語(yǔ)類作文, 首段應(yīng)引入諺語(yǔ)/引語(yǔ)并解釋其含義, 通過英文釋義讓諺語(yǔ)/引語(yǔ)通俗易懂。 2. 發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)或看法并提供支持觀點(diǎn)的證據(jù)。根據(jù)題目要求, 考生可以通過例子來支持這一經(jīng)歷/諺語(yǔ)/引語(yǔ)。所舉的例子可以來自個(gè)人經(jīng)歷、歷史、文學(xué)等。最好使用親身經(jīng)歷來寫, 將諺語(yǔ)的深刻含義用貼近生活的實(shí)例說明白。,3. 末段重申、總結(jié)或提出希望。進(jìn)一步闡述經(jīng)歷/諺語(yǔ)/引語(yǔ)的意義, 利用其含義提出希望或呼吁。,二、敘議結(jié)合類常用詞匯、句型及模板 (一)常用詞匯 1. proverb n. 諺語(yǔ) 2. potential n. 潛力 3. experience n. 經(jīng)歷 4. aspect n. 方面 5. actually adv. 實(shí)際上 6. gradually adv. 逐漸地 7. similarly adv. 同樣地 8. appreciate vt. 感激; 感謝 9. cherish vt. 珍惜 10. responsible adj. 有責(zé)任心的 11. be determined to do sth. 下定決心做某事 12. be faced with great difficulty面對(duì)很大的困難,13. be proud of以而驕傲 14. be aware of意識(shí)到 15. be eager to do sth. 渴望做某事 16. be fed up with厭煩 17. contribute to great progress導(dǎo)致很大進(jìn)步 18. with the help of sb. 在某人的幫助下 19. from sb. s point of view從某人的觀點(diǎn)看 20. get discouraged垂頭喪氣 21. encourage sb. to keep going鼓勵(lì)某人不斷前進(jìn) 22. give up doing sth. 放棄做某事,23. lose heart失去信心 24. attach great importance to重視 25. achieve success獲得成功 26. have trouble/difficulty in在有困難 27. talk of說到; 談到 28. put sth. into practice把某物付諸于實(shí)踐中 29. pay off取得成功 30. make a significant contribution to對(duì)做出突出貢獻(xiàn) 31. take a lesson from從中汲取教訓(xùn) 32. volunteer to do sth. 主動(dòng)去做某事,(二)常用句型 1. 精彩開頭 (2015湖南高考)Praise is really magical. Perhaps many of us had such experience. 或許我們很多人都有這樣的經(jīng)歷。 (2014山東高考)My favorite proverb is “Where theres a will, theres a way”, which means that if you are really determined to do something, you will find a way of doing it and you will achieve success. 我最喜歡的諺語(yǔ)是, 意思是,(2014福建高考)This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldnt get discouraged right after failure. 來自的引語(yǔ)告訴我們,2. 正文佳句 (2015湖南高考)Take myself as an example. I was very naughty in the primary school. 以我自己為例 (2014山東高考)Once, I was faced with great difficulty in learning English, especially in vocabulary and grammar. 曾經(jīng), 我面臨, 尤其是,(2014湖北高考)I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. 我可以清晰地記得一件發(fā)生在的事。 (2014湖北高考)A good case in point is that I learned how to ride a bike with great difficulty at the age of twelve. 是一個(gè)很好的例子。 (2014浙江高考)I fully agree with the proverb and its implication. 我完全同意這個(gè)諺語(yǔ)和它的寓意。,3. 余味結(jié)尾 (2015湖南高考)Every time when I heard others talk to me about my excellent examination result, I thought to myself that I would work even harder and make greater progress. 每次當(dāng)我聽到別人說起, 我心中想我會(huì)更努力學(xué)習(xí)并且取得更大的進(jìn)步。 (2014福建高考)We can learn a lot from the proverb and put it into practice. We should stick at what we are doing and only by doing this can we succeed. 我們可以從這句諺語(yǔ)中受益匪淺, 并且付諸實(shí)踐中。我們應(yīng)該只有這樣做我們才能,(2014山東高考)From what I say above, we can see that people with a strong will are more likely to succeed. 綜上所述, 我們可以知道 (2014福建高考)As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society. 作為社會(huì)的一份子, 我意識(shí)到 (2013湖北高考)Judging from the examples given above, we may safely come to the conclusion that words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways. 從上面的例子中, 我們不難推出,(三)常用模板 The good old proverb“_”(名言或諺語(yǔ))reminds us that_(釋義). Indeed, we can really benefit much from it. First of all, _(理由一). For example, _(舉例說明). Secondly, _(理由二). Another case is that_(舉例說明). Furthermore, _(理由三). In my opinion, _(我的觀點(diǎn)). In short, whatever you do, please remember the saying“_”. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, youll necessarily achieve a lot from it.,