2019-2020年中考英語(yǔ)第三部分中招題型研究六 書面表達(dá) 話題2 發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)（含解析）.doc

2019-2020年中考英語(yǔ)第三部分中招題型研究六 書面表達(dá) 話題2 發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)（含解析）寫作練兵(xx青島改編)現(xiàn)在，很多中學(xué)生被近視困擾，請(qǐng)就此現(xiàn)象寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶?。?nèi)容包括：1. 造成近視的原因；2. 近視對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)或生活的影響；3. 你認(rèn)為應(yīng)該如何保護(hù)視力？(至少兩條建議)要求：1. 語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順； 2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 3. 80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Quite a lot of students have bee nearsighted now. _【審題指導(dǎo)】細(xì)讀所給提示，提取以下信息：1. 以“學(xué)生患近視”為話題，寫一篇關(guān)于近視的記敘文；2. 內(nèi)容包括近視的原因，對(duì)人的影響以及自己提出的保護(hù)視力的方法或建議；3. 描述現(xiàn)象時(shí)，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；4. 詞數(shù)：80左右，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名與人名?！緦懽髦笇?dǎo)】中學(xué)生近視要點(diǎn)提示素材串聯(lián)開頭：提出問題相當(dāng)多的學(xué)生近視(have bee near sighted)正文： 分析原因，描述影響，提出建議。1. 近視產(chǎn)生的原因(學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)習(xí)慣不好)(a good habit, study)2. 近視對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)或生活的影響：(1)沒有眼鏡上課不能記筆記(at home, take notes，in class)(2)游泳時(shí)戴著眼鏡不方便(feel unfortable，swim with glasses)3. 建議保護(hù)視力的辦法：(1)不要長(zhǎng)時(shí)間看書，不休息(on the one hand, shouldnt study for hours，need to relax)(2)多進(jìn)行體育活動(dòng)，做眼保健操(on the other hand, have sports, do eye exercises, helpful)結(jié)尾：提出倡議，保護(hù)眼睛。擁有好的視力很重要，保護(hù)好眼睛(very important，have good eyesight，take good care of)【高分范文】Quite_a_lot_of_students_have_bee_nearsighted_now. I think the main reason is that students dont have a good habit while studying. Bad eyesight brings trouble to our life and study. For example, if we leave our glasses at home, we cant take notes in class. We will feel unfortable when we swim with glasses. Here is my advice: on the one hand, teenagers shouldnt study for hours without breaks because our eyes need to relax. On the other hand, having sports and doing eye exercises are also helpful. Its very important to have good eyesight. So lets take good care of our eyes.話題2發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)（xx年考查）Passage 2(xx商丘模擬)近幾年，中學(xué)生出國(guó)求學(xué)已經(jīng)成為一種新的“時(shí)尚”，大家對(duì)此褒貶不一，請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，并發(fā)表自己的看法，內(nèi)容包含支持者與反對(duì)者的觀點(diǎn)。 要求：1. 語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順； 2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 3. 80詞左右。_ 【審題指導(dǎo)】細(xì)讀所給的文字提示，提取以下信息：1. 要求寫人們對(duì)出國(guó)求學(xué)的看法，因此寫作文體為議論文；2. 描述支持者和反對(duì)者的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)用第三人稱，闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；3. 詞數(shù)在80詞左右，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名。【寫作指導(dǎo)】出國(guó)求學(xué)引熱議要點(diǎn)提示素材串聯(lián)開頭：引出論點(diǎn)越來(lái)越多的中學(xué)生選擇出國(guó)求學(xué)(go abroad)正文支持者的觀點(diǎn)1.可以更好地學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)，了解外國(guó)文化，開闊眼界(learn foreign language; know foreign culture; open their mind)2培養(yǎng)自理能力和交往的能力(the ability of independence and munication)反對(duì)者的觀點(diǎn)1. 不利于中學(xué)生的身心發(fā)展(be bad for; development)2. 一些中學(xué)生為了逃避壓力而出國(guó)留學(xué)(pressure)3. 部分留學(xué)生給外國(guó)人留下了不好的印象(bad impression)結(jié)尾：抒發(fā)自己的觀點(diǎn)1. 出國(guó)留學(xué)好與壞取決于個(gè)人(depend on the individual)2. 出國(guó)要三思(take more factors into consideration)【高分范文】Recently, more and more middle school students choose to go abroad to study. People have different ideas about this.Some people say that studying abroad can make students learn foreign languages, know foreign culture and open their mind. Also, it can develop their abilities of independence and munication with others. But others think studying abroad too early is bad for students development of body and mind. Some students do it just because of too much pressure. At the same time, some leave bad impression on foreigners.Therefore, whether it is good or not to study abroad depends on the individual. So take more factors into consideration.