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1、三、增加細節(jié)的5大策略在英語書面表達中,增加細節(jié)內(nèi)容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提綱類寫作中,考生一定不能簡單地翻譯或者僅僅完成所給條目的指定內(nèi)容;在看圖作文中更不能只是輕描淡寫圖片內(nèi)容,否則很有可能造成內(nèi)容不充實、字數(shù)要求不達標或者結構不連貫。適當增加細節(jié)內(nèi)容,能夠使習作流暢、豐滿,達到應有的表達效果。微技能(一)列舉具體的實例進行補充說明1.我們青少年應盡我們所能保護環(huán)境、拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotectth
2、eenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,refusetousesingle-useproducts,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.2.我要花一些時間和父母待在一起。Illspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.Illspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework.3.我想找一個像我一樣喜歡旅行的筆友。Idli
3、ketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Idliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Ifpossible,wecantraveltogetherorsharetravelingexperiences.4.我是一個充滿活力的健康男孩,我非常喜歡體育運動。Imahealthyboyfullofenergy,soIlikesportsverymuch.Iamahealthyboyfullofenergy,soIlikesportsverymuch,especiallyo
4、utdooractivities.WheneverIhavetime,Illgohikingormountainclimbingwithmyclassmates.題組過關1根據(jù)括號內(nèi)提示完成句子1.TheInternetisplayingamoreandmoreimportantpartinourdailylife.Wecannotonlyreadnewsfromhomeandabroad(我們不僅能閱讀國內(nèi)外的新聞),butalsogetinformation,sendemailsandattendonlineschools.2.LauraisastandardAmericanstyle.S
5、hespeaksperfectAmericanEnglish(她說一口完美的美式英語),andthatswhyIamcrazyabouther.3.However,itseemspeopleareunawareofthenegativeeffectsofmobilephonesoncommunication.Forexample,manypeoplebegintopaylessattentiontoface-to-facecommunication(比如,很多人開始越來越不重視面對面的交流).4.However,everycoinhastwosides,sodoestheInternet.Fo
6、rexample,beinglostintheInternetmayaffectourstudyandwork(比如,沉溺于因特網(wǎng)也許會影響我們的學習和工作).微技能(二)增添與所寫信息相關的神態(tài)、動作、心理描寫以及背景渲染等內(nèi)容1.我有時去村西的小河游泳。Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.Thewaterintheriverwasveryclear.(背景渲染)Weatherpermitting,Iwents
7、wimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.(相關背景)2.我發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些不良行為。Ifoundsomebadbehavior.Ifoundsomebadbehavior.Somepeoplescribbledonthewall;somepeopleplayedsocceronthelawnandsomepeoplethrewrubbisheverywhere.(相關行為描述)3.晚飯后,這位男士走向了臥室。Aftersupper,themanwenttohisbedroom.Afterarichmeal,thefatmanslowlymad
8、ehiswaytohisbedroom.(神態(tài)、動作)題組過關2根據(jù)括號內(nèi)提示完成句子5.Consideringtheactivityisofgreatvalue/ismeaningful(考慮到這項活動很有意義),weintendtodesignauniformsuitedtoourownclass.6.Illtrymybesttomakeyourunclehappyhere.Iameagerlylookingforwardtohisvisittoourcity(我熱切地期盼著他來我們城市參觀).7.Manyteenagersdontpayanyattentiontotheirhealth,
9、especiallyduringtheholiday.TheyspendtoomuchtimewatchingTV(他們花費太多的時間看電視),playinggamesandchattingontheInternetallnight.8.LookingbacktomystayinBritain,Ifeltveryhappyandsatisfied(我感到非常高興和滿意).9.Inthesummervacation,Iamlongingtoget/haveapart-timejob(我渴望得到一份兼職工作).微技能(三)增加相關信息的時間、地點等內(nèi)容1.我要和父母一起去超市購物。Imgoingt
10、odosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarket.Imgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarketandwontbebackuntilabout500intheafternoon.(增加時間)2.我已經(jīng)帶來了你讓我歸還的這兩本書。Ihavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturn.IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.(增加地點)題組過關3根據(jù)括號內(nèi)提示完成句子10.YaoM
11、ing,whowasborninShanghaionSeptember12,1980(1980年9月12日出生于上海),startedplayingfortheShanghaiSharksasateenager.11.TheChineseSilkRoad,whichstartsfromtodaysXianandfinallyfinishesattheeastcoastof(起源于今天的西安,并最后達到的東海岸) theMediterranean,iswell-knowntotheworld.12.TodayIpaidavisittooneofthegreatestcitiesinAsia,Be
12、ijinginChina(在亞洲,中國的北京).13.Iwasattractedbythebeautyofthe city themoment/immediately/assoonas/directly(一就) Iarrivedhereat6oclockinthemorningbyplane.微技能(四)適當增加與所給信息相關的原因、結果、條件、讓步、手段、目的、地點等內(nèi)容1.假設你是李華,你的英國筆友Henry最近來信詢問你高考后的暑假安排。請根據(jù)下面要點寫一封回信,說明你的計劃,并簡述理由。1.休息;2.讀書;3.參加社會活動。(1)Ineedagoodrest.Illdosomeread
13、ing.IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.Ofcourse,Illdosomereadingforfun,andforknowledgeaswell.(因果關系)(2)Illtakepartinsomesocialactivities.IfIhavefreetime,Illtakepartinsomesocialactivities.(條件狀語)Ifpossible,Illtakepartinsomesocialactivities.(條件狀語)Ifpossible,Illtakepartinsom
14、esocialactivitiessothat/inorderthatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.(結果狀語)2.Tracy來電話:咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)見面取消。Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldntmeetyouatBoltonCoffee.Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldntmeetyouatBoltonCoffeeasshehadsomethingimportanttodo.(原因狀語)3.幫助鄰居的孩子們補習英語。Ialsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwit
15、htheirEnglishlessons.IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.Tomyjoy,theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthoughthighlyofme.(增添結果)題組過關4根據(jù)括號內(nèi)提示完成句子14.TombSweepingDay,oneofthetraditionalChinesefestivals(傳統(tǒng)的中國節(jié)日之一),usuallyfallsaroundApril5everyyeartohonorthedeadandsatisfytheirancesto
16、rs.15.Withtheglobalclimatebecomingwarmerandwarmer(伴隨著全球氣候變得越來越暖和),ourearthisfacedwithgreatthreat.16.Situated/Locatedinnortheast(坐落在東北部),Beijingiswell-knownforitsculturalrelicswhichhavebeenthereforalonghistory.17.Duringthisperiod,peoplewillgotocleanthegravesandpayrespecttotheirancestors,carryingfooda
17、ndfruit(帶上食物和水果).18.Beingaseniorschoolstudent(作為一名高中生),itseveryonesdutytodosomethingtosaveourearth.19.Asisknowntoall/Aseveryoneknows(眾所周知),EarthHourisanactivitywhichaimsatsavingenergy.微技能(五)結尾適當發(fā)揮,寫出個人感受、評價、希望愿景、倡議等1.AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholiday,IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid.(個人感受)2.Ithinksuch
18、activitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful.(評價)3.Inaword,ifshewouldliketolearnChinese,Ihopeshewilldoitwell.(愿景)4.Asstudents,itsourdutytoprotectourschoolenvironmentandmakeitclean.(倡議)題組過關5根據(jù)括號內(nèi)提示完成句子20.Asaprofessionalbasketballplayer(作為一名專業(yè)的籃球運動員),heisoneofChinasbest-knownathletes.21.IthinkBeijingiswellwort
19、hasecondvisit(非常值得再次參觀).22.Inmyview,nomatterhow/howeverattractivetheInternetis(不管因特網(wǎng)多么吸引人),itshouldntseparateusfromourlovedones.23.Wedrewaconclusionthroughtheexperiment(通過這個實驗我們得出一個結論):thetemperaturedoesntchangewheniceismeltingintowater.24.Letsdevelopgoodhabitsofsavingenergyinourdailylifeandtrytomak
20、emorecontributionstoourenvironment(盡力為我們的環(huán)境做出更多貢獻).25.Therefore,weshouldspendtimewithourfamilies,enjoyingthetimewhenwearetogether(享受我們在一起的時光).按要求對下列句子進行擴充1.每天要努力學習,為每一次考試做出仔細的計劃。(增加條件狀語)Studyhardeverydayandmakecarefulplansforeveryexam.Ifweareprepared,wewillnotfeelworried.2.復旦大學位于上海。(增加which引導的非限制性定語
21、從句)FudanUniversityislocatedinShanghai,whichisaninternationalcitywhereIcangetalotofknowledgeandexperience.3.不管我將面對什么樣的困難,我都不會屈服。(增加目的狀語)Torealizemydream,whateverchallengeIwillface,Iwillnevergivein.4.我們應該學會如何與他人相處。(增加具體信息說明)Weshouldlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothers.Forexample,weshouldrespectteachersand
22、befriendlywithclassmates.5.一些學生非常擔心考試以至于晚上無法入睡。(增加結果狀語)Somestudentsaresoworriedaboutexamsthattheycantfallasleepatnight.Asaresult,theyfeelsleepyinthedaytimeandcantconcentrateinclass.請為下面的短文適當增加細節(jié)DearSam,TheCollegeEntranceExaminationlastsfortwodays.TheexamineesaretestedonChinese,math,scienceandarts.We
23、arephysicallyandmentallystressedduringtheexaminationandthequestionsaredifficultandcomplex.參考范文DearSam,Thankyouforyourconcern.NowIlltellyousomethingabouttheonce-a-yearCollegeEntranceExamination.Thereisnodoubtthattheexaminationisveryimportant.ItlastsfortwodaysfromJune7thto8th.TheexamineesaretestedonChineseandmathonthefirstday.Scienceandartsaretestedonthesecondday.Wearephysicallyandmentallystressedduringtheexaminationandthequestionsaredifficultandcomplex.Butwearefullofconfidencebecausewearewellprepared.Weallbelievethatthefruitsofoureffortswillbesweet.6
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