（江蘇專版）2020版高考英語大二輪復(fù)習(xí) 專題5 書面表達 第一節(jié) 寫作技能點撥 三 增加細節(jié)的5大策略學(xué)案 牛津譯林版

三、增加細節(jié)的5大策略在英語書面表達中，增加細節(jié)內(nèi)容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提綱類寫作中，考生一定不能簡單地翻譯或者僅僅完成所給條目的指定內(nèi)容；在看圖作文中更不能只是輕描淡寫圖片內(nèi)容，否則很有可能造成內(nèi)容不充實、字數(shù)要求不達標或者結(jié)構(gòu)不連貫。適當增加細節(jié)內(nèi)容，能夠使習(xí)作流暢、豐滿，達到應(yīng)有的表達效果。微技能(一)列舉具體的實例進行補充說明1.我們青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護環(huán)境、拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample，wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags，refusetousesingle-useproducts，plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.2.我要花一些時間和父母待在一起。Illspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.Illspendsometimestayingwithmyparents，chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework.3.我想找一個像我一樣喜歡旅行的筆友。Idliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Idliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Ifpossible，wecantraveltogetherorsharetravelingexperiences.4.我是一個充滿活力的健康男孩，我非常喜歡體育運動。Imahealthyboyfullofenergy，soIlikesportsverymuch.Iamahealthyboyfullofenergy，soIlikesportsverymuch，especiallyoutdooractivities.WheneverIhavetime，Illgohikingormountainclimbingwithmyclassmates.題組過關(guān)1根據(jù)括號內(nèi)提示完成句子1.TheInternetisplayingamoreandmoreimportantpartinourdailylife.Wecannotonlyreadnewsfromhomeandabroad(我們不僅能閱讀國內(nèi)外的新聞)，butalsogetinformation，sendemailsandattendonlineschools.2.LauraisastandardAmericanstyle.ShespeaksperfectAmericanEnglish(她說一口完美的美式英語)，andthatswhyIamcrazyabouther.3.However，itseemspeopleareunawareofthenegativeeffectsofmobilephonesoncommunication.Forexample，manypeoplebegintopaylessattentiontoface-to-facecommunication(比如，很多人開始越來越不重視面對面的交流).4.However，everycoinhastwosides，sodoestheInternet.Forexample，beinglostintheInternetmayaffectourstudyandwork(比如，沉溺于因特網(wǎng)也許會影響我們的學(xué)習(xí)和工作).微技能(二)增添與所寫信息相關(guān)的神態(tài)、動作、心理描寫以及背景渲染等內(nèi)容1.我有時去村西的小河游泳。Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.Thewaterintheriverwasveryclear.(背景渲染)Weatherpermitting，Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.(相關(guān)背景)2.我發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些不良行為。Ifoundsomebadbehavior.Ifoundsomebadbehavior.Somepeoplescribbledonthewall；somepeopleplayedsocceronthelawnandsomepeoplethrewrubbisheverywhere.(相關(guān)行為描述)3.晚飯后，這位男士走向了臥室。Aftersupper，themanwenttohisbedroom.Afterarichmeal，thefatmanslowlymadehiswaytohisbedroom.(神態(tài)、動作)題組過關(guān)2根據(jù)括號內(nèi)提示完成句子5.Consideringtheactivityisofgreatvalue/ismeaningful(考慮到這項活動很有意義)，weintendtodesignauniformsuitedtoourownclass.6.Illtrymybesttomakeyourunclehappyhere.Iameagerlylookingforwardtohisvisittoourcity(我熱切地期盼著他來我們城市參觀).7.Manyteenagersdontpayanyattentiontotheirhealth，especiallyduringtheholiday.TheyspendtoomuchtimewatchingTV(他們花費太多的時間看電視)，playinggamesandchattingontheInternetallnight.8.LookingbacktomystayinBritain，Ifeltveryhappyandsatisfied(我感到非常高興和滿意).9.Inthesummervacation，Iamlongingtoget/haveapart-timejob(我渴望得到一份兼職工作).微技能(三)增加相關(guān)信息的時間、地點等內(nèi)容1.我要和父母一起去超市購物。Imgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarket.Imgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarketandwontbebackuntilabout500intheafternoon.(增加時間)2.我已經(jīng)帶來了你讓我歸還的這兩本書。Ihavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturn.IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.(增加地點)題組過關(guān)3根據(jù)括號內(nèi)提示完成句子10.YaoMing，whowasborninShanghaionSeptember12,1980(1980年9月12日出生于上海)，startedplayingfortheShanghaiSharksasateenager.11.TheChineseSilkRoad，whichstartsfromtodaysXianandfinallyfinishesattheeastcoastof(起源于今天的西安，并最后達到的東海岸) theMediterranean，iswell-knowntotheworld.12.TodayIpaidavisittooneofthegreatestcitiesinAsia，BeijinginChina(在亞洲，中國的北京).13.Iwasattractedbythebeautyofthe city themoment/immediately/assoonas/directly(一就) Iarrivedhereat6oclockinthemorningbyplane.微技能(四)適當增加與所給信息相關(guān)的原因、結(jié)果、條件、讓步、手段、目的、地點等內(nèi)容1.假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Henry最近來信詢問你高考后的暑假安排。請根據(jù)下面要點寫一封回信，說明你的計劃，并簡述理由。1.休息；2.讀書；3.參加社會活動。(1)Ineedagoodrest.Illdosomereading.IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.Ofcourse，Illdosomereadingforfun，andforknowledgeaswell.(因果關(guān)系)(2)Illtakepartinsomesocialactivities.IfIhavefreetime，Illtakepartinsomesocialactivities.(條件狀語)Ifpossible，Illtakepartinsomesocialactivities.(條件狀語)Ifpossible，Illtakepartinsomesocialactivitiessothat/inorderthatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.(結(jié)果狀語)2.Tracy來電話：咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)見面取消。Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldntmeetyouatBoltonCoffee.Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldntmeetyouatBoltonCoffeeasshehadsomethingimportanttodo.(原因狀語)3.幫助鄰居的孩子們補習(xí)英語。IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.Tomyjoy，theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthoughthighlyofme.(增添結(jié)果)題組過關(guān)4根據(jù)括號內(nèi)提示完成句子14.TombSweepingDay，oneofthetraditionalChinesefestivals(傳統(tǒng)的中國節(jié)日之一)，usuallyfallsaroundApril5everyyeartohonorthedeadandsatisfytheirancestors.15.Withtheglobalclimatebecomingwarmerandwarmer(伴隨著全球氣候變得越來越暖和)，ourearthisfacedwithgreatthreat.16.Situated/Locatedinnortheast(坐落在東北部)，Beijingiswell-knownforitsculturalrelicswhichhavebeenthereforalonghistory.17.Duringthisperiod，peoplewillgotocleanthegravesandpayrespecttotheirancestors，carryingfoodandfruit(帶上食物和水果).18.Beingaseniorschoolstudent(作為一名高中生)，itseveryonesdutytodosomethingtosaveourearth.19.Asisknowntoall/Aseveryoneknows(眾所周知)，EarthHourisanactivitywhichaimsatsavingenergy.微技能(五)結(jié)尾適當發(fā)揮，寫出個人感受、評價、希望愿景、倡議等1.AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholiday，IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid.(個人感受)2.Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful.(評價)3.Inaword，ifshewouldliketolearnChinese，Ihopeshewilldoitwell.(愿景)4.Asstudents，itsourdutytoprotectourschoolenvironmentandmakeitclean.(倡議)題組過關(guān)5根據(jù)括號內(nèi)提示完成句子20.Asaprofessionalbasketballplayer(作為一名專業(yè)的籃球運動員)，heisoneofChinasbest-knownathletes.21.IthinkBeijingiswellworthasecondvisit(非常值得再次參觀).22.Inmyview，nomatterhow/howeverattractivetheInternetis(不管因特網(wǎng)多么吸引人)，itshouldntseparateusfromourlovedones.23.Wedrewaconclusionthroughtheexperiment(通過這個實驗我們得出一個結(jié)論)：thetemperaturedoesntchangewheniceismeltingintowater.24.Letsdevelopgoodhabitsofsavingenergyinourdailylifeandtrytomakemorecontributionstoourenvironment(盡力為我們的環(huán)境做出更多貢獻).25.Therefore，weshouldspendtimewithourfamilies，enjoyingthetimewhenwearetogether(享受我們在一起的時光).按要求對下列句子進行擴充1.每天要努力學(xué)習(xí)，為每一次考試做出仔細的計劃。(增加條件狀語)Studyhardeverydayandmakecarefulplansforeveryexam.Ifweareprepared，wewillnotfeelworried.2.復(fù)旦大學(xué)位于上海。(增加which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)FudanUniversityislocatedinShanghai，whichisaninternationalcitywhereIcangetalotofknowledgeandexperience.3.不管我將面對什么樣的困難，我都不會屈服。(增加目的狀語)Torealizemydream，whateverchallengeIwillface，Iwillnevergivein.4.我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會如何與他人相處。(增加具體信息說明)Weshouldlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothers.Forexample，weshouldrespectteachersandbefriendlywithclassmates.5.一些學(xué)生非常擔心考試以至于晚上無法入睡。(增加結(jié)果狀語)Somestudentsaresoworriedaboutexamsthattheycantfallasleepatnight.Asaresult，theyfeelsleepyinthedaytimeandcantconcentrateinclass.請為下面的短文適當增加細節(jié)DearSam，TheCollegeEntranceExaminationlastsfortwodays.TheexamineesaretestedonChinese，math，scienceandarts.Wearephysicallyandmentallystressedduringtheexaminationandthequestionsaredifficultandcomplex.參考范文DearSam，Thankyouforyourconcern.NowIlltellyousomethingabouttheonce-a-yearCollegeEntranceExamination.Thereisnodoubtthattheexaminationisveryimportant.ItlastsfortwodaysfromJune7thto8th.TheexamineesaretestedonChineseandmathonthefirstday.Scienceandartsaretestedonthesecondday.Wearephysicallyandmentallystressedduringtheexaminationandthequestionsaredifficultandcomplex.Butwearefullofconfidencebecausewearewellprepared.Weallbelievethatthefruitsofoureffortswillbesweet.6