2022年高考英語二輪總復(fù)習(xí) 第26講 書面表達技巧點撥學(xué)案

2022年高考英語二輪總復(fù)習(xí) 第26講 書面表達技巧點撥學(xué)案增強書面表達效果的技巧一、遣詞方面：有換詞概念1使用高級的詞匯或短語或替換同義初級詞匯。例1. He studies hard. So he does well in all the subjects.He studies hard. Therefore,_he does well in all the subjects.He studies hard. As a result, he does well in all the subjects.He studies hard. As_a_consequence,_he does well in all the subjects.2使用單詞的多種詞性，使句子多樣化。例1. A dictionary is very important in English study.A dictionary is of_great_importance in English study.例2. He is successful in his career.He achieves_a_great_success in his career.二、造句方面：使句子多樣化形容詞開頭：The boy, hungry and thirsty, went back home.Hungry_and_thirsty,_the boy went back home.副詞開頭：The children stayed there quietly.Quietly,_the children stayed there.不定式開頭：He got up early to catch the first bus.To_catch_the_first_bus,_he got up early.分詞開頭：If you give me enough time, I can do it well.Given_enough_time,_I can do it well.After he finished the exercise, he went out.Finishing_the_exercise,_he went out. (xx浙江卷)假設(shè)你是高中生李越，有感于校園中存在的隨意涂寫(to scribble)和亂丟垃圾(to litter)的行為，請用英語給校長寫一封100120個詞的信。信中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容： 1說明寫信目的； 2對這些行為進行批評； 3提出建議。 注意：信的抬頭、落款及信的第一句已給出(不計詞數(shù))。June 8, xxDear Mr. Headmaster，I'm Li Yue, a student from Class 1, Senior. _ _ Your faithfully， Li Yue 解題步驟：第一步：審題定文體。題目已明確要求是寫一封信給校長反映校園里隨意涂寫和亂丟垃圾的行為，信的抬頭落款及信的第一句已給出。第二步：確定總體時態(tài)和人稱。人稱：第一人稱。時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時。第三步：確定寫作思路，所需主要詞匯和所用表達結(jié)構(gòu)。寫作思路：根據(jù)題目要求，先要說明寫信目的是為了反映校園中存在的隨意涂寫(to scribble)和亂丟垃圾(to litter)的行為；然后對這些行為進行批評；并提出可行性建議。因此作文內(nèi)容表達分三個層次展開。主要詞匯：improper behaviour, makes our school dirty and unpleasant, set up specific rules重點句型：在寫作時可用以下句型來組織完成句子：表寫信目的的句型：I am writing to draw your attention to表對不良現(xiàn)象提出批評的句型：It is not appropriate for students to表向?qū)Ψ教峤ㄗh的句型：(1)針對校方：I wonder if school could(可用被動語態(tài)句式) Some measures can be taken to prevent students from(2)針對學(xué)生：students should be encouraged to/discouraged to(3)可用一個強調(diào)句結(jié)尾： It is only with the joint efforts of both teachers and students that our school will bee a more pleasant place in the near future.【范文賞析】June 8, xx Dear Mr. Headmaster, I am Li Yue, a student from Class 1, Senior . I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students: littering and scribbling. It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does hard to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbinsaround and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will bee a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Li Yue